Poor Prowl being reprogrammed as the enemy and poor Jazz feeling his torture. Glad he survived and like how you separated him and Barricade so now Jazz as two brothers.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I just blasted through this story and i'm so overcharged on adrenaline and joy from how it turned out i can barely type or speak correctly i love this so much! I really really REALLY liked the part where Prowl and Barricade shot and then lowered their weapons in sync that was AWESOME!
(though i feel absolutely horrible for all the pain that everyone suffered)

You know… this could set up a rather brilliant story of Barricade and Fiona progressing in their job, perhaps some humor in there. And then it would get interesting when Blackout and Scorponok get involved. You know what I might know a guy who can pull that off… but, no, I'll leave it to you.

The whole time I was reading this, I was hoping that you wouldn't 'kill' Barricade. After all, you can't really blame a guy for not wanting to just disappear. I'm glad you found a solution, though I must say you tipped your hat when you deliberately mentioned the protoform.

In any case, this was a very enjoyable story.

nice

Wonderful. Loved this story completely. And no I dont believe 'Cade's change was too abrupt.

I've followed this fic for a while now, and I've very much enjoyed reading this and seeing updates in my inbox.

Such a lovely and satisfying conclusion too~

I very much enjoyed this story. In fact, I think it's just topped my personal list of favourite Prowl/Barricade stories. You made their forced co-existence believable and kept both of them in character, even as you gradually evolved Barricade's perception of his world. In the end, I was rooting for both of them to survive, so I found your solution welcome. Barricade is going to have his work cut out for him adjusting to having two brothers, but that's probably a good thing - he'd lose his temper with either one of them far quicker than with two to balance one another.

I liked the way you wrote Jazz here too. It was good to see him as a strong and intelligent character, even as he tried to puzzle out what was going on. He didn't let the feelings and emotion from his bond overwhelm him, only to guide him as he did what he had to. It was nice to see the trust and confidence the other autobots had in him as well. They may not have trusted Barricade, but their faith in Jazz never wavered, which was good to see.

It was also interesting to read your take on the problems of the Autobots' integration. It was never going to be an easy progress, and the idea of car-crushing gangs is all too easy to imagine. You kept a light touch on everything going on in the background, but put enough detail in to put the characters in a plausible world. All in all, I found this a believable and enjoyable spin-off from the first movie and a nice study of the close brotherly relationship between Jazz and Prowl, as well as the logical consequences of the first film.

Good writing!

nice chapter but it sure took you long enough can't wait for more

interesting chapter and story so far can't wait for more and hopefully prowl will come back eventually

This is really good. I can't wait for more!

What's gonna happen?

Interesting concept - I'm enjoying the story, the pacing and the characterization! Looking forward to the next update.

interesting

please finish this!