The Creevey brothers are Muggleborn, but great chapter!

Overall I must say I really did enjoy this fic. There were a couple p!it points that I personally disagreed with but I totally acknowledge that those are personal opinions, it has nothing to do with the quality of your writing because honestly, it is too notch. You describe things so well, I'm never left feeling like I'm only seeing half the picture but I also like that you don't go overboard as well. It's a difficult line to walk but you do so amazingly well! I also loved the little tweaks to a few of the characters, the lestranges in particular obviously. Even though they attacked the Weasleys and are the cause of some of their deaths, by the end of the fic it is crazy that I still end up liking them and even sympathizing with the . I wish I knew what happened the Harry, the whole unrequited love thing breaks my heart and I wish you had thrown a bit in about everyone else and where they have ended up. Newayz, thank you so much for a great fic! Kudos!

I like the turn around that Draco has had, definitely makes me be less annoyed with him. Although I really do hope he gets over being quite so possessive. I mean he has seen her but Harry before and yet allmif a sudden she won't even shake his hand because she is worries about what Draco will think? Pshhhh, the man was there when she gave birth! If can get over that, he can get over her hugging him, just saying. Im also kinda torn on the whole Dudley murder thing. Draco obviously regretted it to the extent that he mentally kinda had a breakdown, but he also never actually dealt with it. I don't even care if had been kept mostly hush hush and if even Harry never found out about it but I do think that he should have been made to have to deal mentally and emotionally with what he had done. I think it definitely would have gone a long way into him realizing that his obsessive love of Luna is really unhealthy and maybe would have made him realize that things like that are more apt to make him lose her than anything else, he doesn't need to worry about her and another man, he needs to worry about being a man that is worthy of her. Concidering his mental state at the time and after, Im pretty sure she would have forgiven him this once, but definitely would have made it clear that it is a one time only thing and he will lose her if he ever pulls something like that again.

Omg! I totally forgot about Neville! I'm glad he kept his head and still wants to be friends with Luna.

lol, it's hilarious to me how frustrated Draco gets when Harry does nothing but just be a good person. I mean even when he lies for Harry when he was caught by snatchers, he only did it to look good for Luna, not because it was the right thing to do. If it bothers him so much, idk why doesn't he try doing the same thing? lol

I gotta say...I really wish she had had a girl as his first born, all that crap about how it has better be a boy and if it's not then he is a failure is just that...crap...plus it would have been nice to see a baby girl wrap him completely around her finger. If they have more than one Im sure a girl will most likely be in there somewhere but it just won't be the same as if his firstborn had been. but alas...what can ya do? lol

Well, that's one hell of a bunch of twists and turns in the last few chapters. Draco actually getting over himself and not giving into his anger that Harry was there while Luna gave birth, just being glad that she wasn't alone?! Shocking! But the truth of Luna's father?! Which I didn't even think to question?! Dumbfounded!

Ok...I will admit...Draco redeemed himself a lot for me I this chapter... legit warm fuzzy...hehehe

It's just so crazy to me that her mom was a death eater! It just gets the question of how she got with Lovegood, why she signed Luna's marriage contract and just how involved was she really? So far it sounds like she was in it pretty deep.

I must say that having Lucius and Cissy turn is a very intriguing twist that I didn't see coming. I still don't get how Narcissia did a 180 in regards to Luna just because she saw that book, there was hints at some kind of secret but nothing since then so I have no idea. Im a little torn about Draco not remembering what he did, i guess it all depends on where he goes from here. If he starts making changes for the good then maybe it is better that he doesn't remember exactly what the trigger was, but if not...Regardless I still feel like Luna should know more of the truth, even if she doesn't find out that Draco killed Dudley she should at least know that everything leading up to it was his idea. However since Lucius has changed sides idk about if it should get out that the whole Weasley disaster was his idea, idk how much it will actually help anyone.

Gah, she has a right to know! I really hope that eventually she finds out everything! I know that she will eventually forgive everyone, but they owe her a ton of groveling first!

I hope Luna finds out what Draco said to her father. Hell I hope she finds out that he knew about Lucius setting him up to be locked away too. He doesn't even feel bad about it! Honestly it is down right creepy how possessive he is, he doesn't want her to have anything else in her life except him, he even got jealous of their unborn kid after hearing about his father's affair! So much has been kept from her and she doesn't even know just how much she has already been manipulated...I really hope she starts week g the truth soon...

Noooooo! How could she forgive him so fast! Wtf?!

Good! I'm glad she finally found out! He is so controlling about wanting to know her every thought and even earlier in the chapter told her she shouldn't keep secrets from him and here he has been doing it to her!

The way Theo went about it was all wrong, but the boy has a point. Draco may not be intentionally killing her spirit but that is exactly what he is doing and he is definitely turning her into the Stepford wife version of a pureblood wife, makes me sad.