| Reviews for Murder Mystery Mansion |
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   reppad98 chapter 11 . 4/17/2017 D'awwww! This was such a very sweet ending! And really, this whole story was just so very sweet. PokeshipperByHeart recommended this story to me, by the way. I really enjoyed this story, especially the ending, because I couldn't imagine how this was going to end badly. Delia at the end was great. Sometimes this story was almost a bit too cheesy and dramatic, and there were some grammatical errors, but it was nonetheless enjoyable to read. I especially liked the way you solved the cruise not happening, because even though neither Ash nor Misty seem to have drawn the conclusion (maybe they will realize it later) is that because they put the Murdery Mystery Mansion villains in jail, the cruise was not happening and Misty could stay. Oh, and I also liked how we got to see old characters again, that was very nice. Thank you for writing this, I liked it, and keep writing! ! |
| cutetwist chapter 8 . 2/17/2014 This is my second time reading this story! I love it! |
| Sol chapter 2 . 2/6/2014 I just love the story. It's not too cheesy, but you really get aaml feeling while reading. It is very interesting, congratulations - that's the best aaml love story I have read so far :) |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/30/2013 Awesome! Loving it! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/23/2013 The battle scene was really good, actually. I think that was the first time I hadn't skipped over it. Great story so far. (I wanted to specifically review the battle.) |
| fairy tail nalu chapter 3 . 3/21/2012 Awsome... i am still reading it though :D |
| IvyBean chapter 11 . 1/8/2011 OMG...-SOBS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL ENDING- AWESOMEEE NESSS BLOOMS FROM YOUR FIC really really loved this one because the plot was super good and it was ultimately fluffai. Plus, it was AaMl XDDD If I could favorite more than once I could but unfortuantely I'm only allowed 1 .'AWESOME FIC ANYWAYSSSS! |
| IvyBean chapter 10 . 1/8/2011 OMG ;o; SO BEAUTIFU :3 Awwww, Ash and Misty act so cute and Ash has finally figured it out~ This chapter was so fluffai. My heart beats happily just thinking about it 3 |
| IvyBean chapter 9 . 1/8/2011 NOOO! ASHY!DDD; SOBS NOOO NOOOOOO~! Nice cliffie tho, the battles were awesome. You're really good at writing them :D I like how Ash and Misty continue to save each other :) |
| IvyBean chapter 8 . 1/8/2011 Ooh yes! They escaped...or did they? Awesome cliffie and I loved this chapter. It was really really good! I love how everyone is so teasing XDD |
| IvyBean chapter 7 . 1/8/2011 OM...D: POOR MISTY AND POOR ASH! WAHHHH! Poor Misty! This chapter was very well written and I like how everything's flowing :) |
| IvyBean chapter 6 . 1/8/2011 OMIGAAWSH CLIFFIE DX I loved the battle tho, it was really awesome! EEvee's so amazing!~ And haha, Brock and Suzie~3 CUUTE! WAHHH, what's gonna happen now? D: I hope nothing bad... |
| IvyBean chapter 5 . 1/8/2011 AWESOME :DDDDDDDDDDDD YAY! The battle was amazing!~ It was so creepy when the butler dude just appeared tho XDDD LOL, I really liked this chapter because of AaMl hints XDD |
| IvyBean chapter 4 . 1/8/2011 Awww! AAML! 3 3 Ooh, they're at the party now. Misty sounds like she looks fantastic... - Haha, love how Ash so jealous of Rudy XD |
| IvyBean chapter 3 . 1/8/2011 TTTT SO CUTE FLUFFAINESS~3 3 3 OMG, Eevee is SOO cute! I love it! Aww~ It was so sweet when Misty talked about not evolving it for a while because of Ash and also when he comforted her 3 X3 |
