This was a masterpiece I never read story without slash because I consider them boring but hey this story got me hook up from the very beginning to the end. Anyway I enjoyed every bit of it and I felt every feelings like I was inside of the book.

"Sometimes I think you are a human in disguise"... How the hell did you know that Nagini was really a woman so so long before fantastic Beasts 2 came out?

this is wonderful thank you for writing it. this is by 5th time reading and I have loved every second of it.

Omg so I'm rereading this for the millionth time and I just came across this quote about Nagini and I have to laugh at the irony

"I trust you to keep him safe", Theo said to the snake, knowing she had a big ego. As usual, she stared at him as if he was an idiot. "I know you'll keep him safe, I just like seeing that expression. Sometimes I think you are a human in disguise."

Oh, wow! Pure brilliance, here

I have been reading this story, but some aspects of it bothered me so I wanted to mention it in the comments. Tom had always been rather twisted from his childhood, so reading him as as a shy-ish, meek character who seems rather innocent seemed too OOC for my tastes. Its a good story, but I wish the OOC part was mentioned prior to the start of the story in the description.

I love that Theo said nagini seemed like a human in disguise when in fantastic beasts she really was a human turned snake.

LOL, I comment on your previous chapter and in the very next your A/N answers my comment. How serendipitous.

You have a very nice plot here. Unfortunately, I keep getting startled out of the story when new information pops up. Your writing style seems to be more telling us things and having the reader experience them. For example, when Harry talked about Ron and Hermione trying to kill him. That just seemed to pop out of nowhere and there was no build up for it. And Harry all the sudden deciding he was dark at the beginning of the story. It’s just that hard to get immersed in the plot when the character keeps changing on you. I really like the idea though. And I like a lot of the elements to it, like the rune earring and the snake necklace. I really want to find out what that does. Overall, a good effort.

Did he choose gold eyes for his glamour because of Hedwig? Also, he removed his glamour in Gringotts when he met Ranglook but he still had his rune earring. Wasn't that part of the glamour?

Heh... quoting Voldie now...

Loved! Super excited to read the sequel.

This is completely wicked!
I am SO reading the sequel!

I have no words... Great story tho can't wait to read the sequel

I can't believe this shit! Why isn't Dumbledore in jail then? Great ending, by the way.

Oh my god I loved this so much I am definitely reading the sequel
-SL xxx