cuando va ese?

aja y puede ser que en este fic como piccolo es la madre puede ser que gohan se lo coja una ves? digo yo nose puede ser que piccolo sea una vez uke

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwww, pregunta... lo embarazo por la boca? osea no entendi

I liked the first stories you made here better than the new ones on archiveofourown. The ones in archiveofourown have so many loopholes and are so pretentious. The plot is so forced too. Is that why you don't allow guest reviews? Hehe. At least this one is heartfelt and cute. About your WAWO plot... the whole idea about Piccolo getting pregnant with just the slightest ingestion of DNA is like... huh? You do know that's kind of ludicrous right? We always ingest DNA from EVERYTHING! It is such a stupid idea I can't believe you haven't even realized it after writing so many chapters. When Piccolo eats and drinks that contains DNA of creatures in it. He does not have to share anyone's water bottle. You have just made namekians the universe's universa based on that posit. If that were the case then Piccolo, Dende and ALL namekians would always be pregnant. Piccolo breathes and he gets pregnant. But for some reason he only gets pregnant after sharing a water bottle with Gohan? And you even mentioned that Nameks chew off others to punish them... so they chew others out to a bloody pulp and don't get pregnant huh? They chew others to a bloody pulp with their razor sharp fearsome fangs and Piccolo whines about a plastic water bottle being too hard on his fangs? What? Why the heck would he have an animal skin water bottle anyway? Did he get it as a gift? Hehe. Did he kill an animal just to make it? Did he eat an animal then make a water bottle of its carcass (then he should have gotten pregnant from the DNA of the animal he ate, because dead animals still have DNA). Have you forgotten that he can make objects appear out of thin air? So the idea of him having an animal skin water bottle is as ridiculous as the DNA theory of yours. Of course you know that animal skin has DNA too right? Even if the animal is dead its DNA can live on for very long. You do know that right? So why didn't he get pregnant from his "ANIMAL SKIN" water bottle? Did he make sure the DNA is dead before he drank from it? So many more loopholes in your story. The ones here, even if you are so ashamed of them, are STILL much, much better.

I know it's probably never going to happen -seeing as it's 2016 - but are you ever going to make arms wide open? I love your stories and I'm not very happy with the version that was made on archive of our own, and I'd love to see this trilogy(?) come to a close. Either way, keep up the good work!

I absoloutoy loved it. Have you written the third yet? I couldn't find it I'm sorry haha. But I adored this story so much!

Ahhhhhhh! Too damn cute, thank you!

I love this couple please continue it someday

I like it!

I'm just wondering,but do you ever plan on finishing any of your stories, or planned sequels? It's been three years since you were last on, and I enjoyed your DBZ series.

Here's to hoping you'll finished like you had planned.

post again soon

THAT... WAS... /AWESOME/!
I /LOVE/ *THIS*!
You made this perfect... You got Piccolo's character perfect with just the right amount of feeling and emotion without be to mushy! I like the way yo described the kid!

Ohhhhhhh... that... /that/ was GOOD!
Really /REALLY/ GOOD...

I think maybe the laughing was his way of going through shock and panic... I like piccolo apology... its cute...

Ouch that arm's gotta hurt... Chi-chi- isn't mean she's weird!

Wow.. O_o I like this!