omg, I love this song! XD

That was so sweet!

And yes, I did realise what they were doing! :P

I like all of it. Well... I don't think you write anymore, but I've got an idea... What if Lilly is anorexia?

aww

Um. Wow. Not in a good way.

Your story has a lot of potential. But, what it lacks is...

grammar?

There were so many mistakes that I lost count at 15. No kidding, no bitching.

Get a really good beta and then try again. You can do it.

Because Truth Be Told?

Your work needs help.

Ok so, I cried, i thought she was actually going to do it! but, i started laughing when i read the little A/N... LOL but, that was SO sad and so great! i loved reading it!

i liked it alot better than i thought i would from the summary!

dude, i totally loved it! skillet is one of my favorite bands!

I loved the story and I loved the song. I listen to it or sing it all the time. Skillet is a contemporary Christian group right? Well, I can honesyly say I loved it, but not the part that they "did it." I'm sorry, but I'm all on abstinence.

AWESOME! maybe another loliver one-shot where she close to committing suicide and hes there during the incident and saves her! idk sounds good! :)

Great story :).