I love it! Could be a little bit more realistic to the series and Ryou's personality

This was just amazing!
It wasn't rushed, the characters were acting as themselves... well it was perfect!
Congratulations!

I've never read such an amazing piece of Ryou and Ichigo! It's AWESOME! Even better than MY stories. (As if my stories were ever good)

I may be shouting dumbass at ichigo now even though she isn't one but she is at the same time !?

I NEED MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! :D

AWWWW this was sooo sweet! i loved it! great job xx

kawaii!

OH MY GOSH! :D this was sooooo GOOD!
i loved the ending! keep up the great work!

What a romantic story, not to mention the lightning gave me an idea for the story. I may actually make it have a twist and turn it into a RyouXIchigo fic. If you want to read it, it is called Sailor Mew and is a TMM and Sailor Moin crossover fanfic.

Very good should have been more tounge but it was still good

i REALLY love it! it was wonderful! i love stories which characters act like themselves and which ichigo fell in love with ryou without realizing :DD

Just wanted to let you know this story was great...it was a little annoying in the beginning, but totally redeeming toward the end. So I added this to my budding C2! Keep writing!

This is such a cute one-shot! Why is it only a one-shot? WHY? Write more!

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please continue it, or make a sequel! PLEASEE! :[

I'll be cheering you on!

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Raquelle

Aww...so cute! it was written really well! :)

Hey! wow, I was pleasantly suprised. It's hard to come by good Ryou/ Ichigo fanfiction now adays but it's nice to stumble upon good writers. Really cute story :)