A great story. Very well written.

I really want you to make an sequel to this story i really like your writing style.

You are a really good writer, the world flow together their not awkward you have good sentence structure and i really enjoy reading you're story. I rally rally hope you consider continuing this story i would love to see where you would take it. :)

I liked this take on Edward setting off for his rebellious years. It was good.

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PLEASE write a sequel! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

LOVED IT

Sequal? Plz

That was really interesting, I never really thought about why Edward left Carlisle and Esme. I like the way you wrote it too, I can kind of picture Edward doing that.

oh...*tear* that was so sad. Great story! I loved it.

Really excellent.

Haven't seen too many of these, they're goo though. :)

This was very beautifully written.

Poor Edward, only thinks he's doing what's best. Too bad it'll come back to haunt him!

Ever think of continuing with this? He was gone for something like seven years, wasn't he?

That's a long time for him to realized what he's done!

Anyways, good one-shot!

That was one of the most well writen one shots I've ever read. It was an incredible look into why Edward left Carlisle for that time. I'd to read Edward as a vigilante of sorts even if its for all the wrong reasons. keep up the good work

Wow that was really good. I loved it. Maybe you could continue writing it?

This is great! I just loved the conversation between Edward and Carlisle at the end, you have them completley in character! I personally think you should contine this, it would make a really good story! But its up to you really, it's nice as a oneshot too!