I loved the plot twists... You are an amazing writer!

its been a while since this has been posted, but 1 thing. i love this story so fucking much. Thanks for this story...

This is. . .sad. It's sad. A good story, don't get me wrong, but sad. It's a sad story that makes me want to stab a baby and kiss the hunchback. But honestly, I love how Jesse and James are the "good guys" (I guess) because I just love them but it makes me so upset when they're all about how Giovanni is the greatest or something stupid like that. I wish that Ash and Gary had lived but you know, it is what it is. . .
hehe. Good job!~

Wtf kinda ndinyh way that. (Cries) BTW good storyh. :) ;(

I liked that fact that you compared it to Shakespeare, but basically yeah. That is a true tradgic story. I fairly enjoyed it. Good job.

This is Great story! Palletshipping forever!

Just in case you burst out your anger at my comment: I tried not to make it offending. I see that you have many positive reviews and supporters, another word of advice is to try to look past that and see how else you could have improved and move into more mature story-telling techniques. There are some really good fanfiction on this site which you can take a look at to see if they inspire you. I recommend Footsoldiers by StormyNight55 or Seven Parasols by youroctober for Palletshipping.

I had been drawn in by the summary. While I liked the initial plot, I'm disappointed to say that this story had used about every mary-sue-like plot cliches one can find out there in the world of fanfiction. Needless to say, I skimmed through most of the story, because I hate not finishing what I started. I suggest going to Google and try searching for fiction writing for beginners and you may find some useful tips to improve yourself.

This was so beautiful and I cried so many times,this was truly amazing! c:

I have never read anything so amazing. You may be an amateur, but this was wonderful.

At least they can do it in heaven?... Oh god im going to hell for that. That was a very heartwarming story (in my point of view.) and i love it. I would kill to get a sequeal of them as angels, reuniting, then ... a lemon. Oh god, im disturbing.. Anyways, love it!

So heartwarming and beautiful

and what happens after death we never know but we can believe.

WHY CAN'T I HOLD ALL THESE FEELS! ;-;

A classic Yaoi tale like anything born from the dark ages of manga and anime, is much like a good desert; sweet with a bitter finish, and altogether too short, it is a classic love tale, the uke dies young a beautiful usually in tragic fashion and the seme his heart consumed; either takes his own life in grief or pines away weeping for his lost love.