UPDATE!

aw... when's the next chappy coming?

That was definitely fun to read :) and while my main attention was kept on the revelation and how the news were going to be delivered, I think that the last part with Shunsui and Nanao was a great addition.

love it!

Yay! you updated. It's your sorry excuse for a friend, Jana! Girl, you just would not believe all of the stuff going on...anyway...I love your story! Keep it coming. I love it. I am so excited to read more from you...you just don't know. Take care and don't work too hard!

Love ya,

Jana

Loved the update :) I didn't know you were going to keep on the story so it took me by surprise to find an update.

I definitely liked the way you depicted Matsumoto, her little trip down to memory lane was interesting as it makes a comparison between her past and her present and future.

Keep up!

please write more. :)

"April Fools!" I love it! I like this chapter a lot. I laughed really hard when Matsumoto said "How long are you going to stare at me?" ha ha ha that is so cute! And you say you aren't productive... That is an understatement.

awesome

according to this analysis of your story-glances at paper on desk-you seem to be a... COMPLETELY AWESOME WRITER I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PAIRING GREAT STORY

Itadakimasu indeed ne hahahahaha

I don't think you give yourself enough credit...seriously...you are a great writer! “I swear to God I will ravage you.”...that is a great line...it's like a slap in the face. I like how you incorporate the past with the current story. I notice a lot of writers just focus on the pairing or the present without any regard to the past...whether you or i like it...the fact that gin was apart of rangiku's life and momo was apart of toshiros will not change. Everyone that i have met in my life has affected who i am today...the same goes for these characters. I think you hit the nail on the head. She is terrified to be intimate. Wouldn't you be? And everyone views toshiro as a frigid jerk. He isn't. It's a front and I think you do a great job of stripping him of his facade. He is a young man and to think that he couldn't be attracted to rangiku is just naive. Wonderful story! I enjoyed it. More! More!

You say you've been out of touch with writing... but I think that's strange.

Because after reading this, I thought this was good quality writing! Proably more than what even you thought it was.

You write really good HitsuxMatsu. Their characters are kept in tack and the story is really good. Great Job!

Good fic. Love HitsuMatsu!

Man the interaction...I was laughing my ass off half the time. But good transition between being humorous to being serious. I enjoyed it. Thanks for putting time into this Vacant. Can't wait to see an Update or a new story.

All the Best,

~drag-eart