In chapter 9 when is said she is my daughter I was like daaaaaang plot twis

it is such lovely story
i hope there will be sequel

Just finished reading Chapter 4!

Spoilers for anyone reading!

I think that Yukimura's doctor is Ryoma's real mom's 1st love. Since I think his last name is the same as Rinko's "maiden" name. Of course, I could be wrong...

I KNEW IT! HAHAHAHAHA! I knew it that Ren was ryoma's father! And I'm confused in what happened when she looked out the window! Does she see her mom's face or something? Or does she look at her star? But it's a very interesting story even though I don't really 'like' the pairing. Sorry!
Mada Mada Dane.

I have a guess. Well not a guess but a prediction because you slipped something before! He is Ren, and Ren is the name of the first love Rinko was talking about in a flashback. And also I don't really think that eiji and ryoma pairing would fit for this situation. It would rather fit if it was Fuji but who am I to complain? It's your story and you can do what ever with it. And my prediction for Ren is Rinko's first love and about Ray...hmmm... Not sure.
And nice plot you have, it's just a little confusing. I don't seem to get what's going on but I know enough to know what's going on! If you know what I mean.
Sorry for this long reveiw. Ill go back reading now and reveiw again if I have the need to.
Mada Mada Dane!

Is Ren Ryoma's father or is Nanjirou her father?
I'm so confused!

I love this story o! not often do i get to read about a pedophile character, Ryoma's daddy is so cutee

I absolutely loved this story. it''s so sad that ryoma didn't have her real dad for long. ren was hilarious, so he was the 2nd fave character, following ryoma. anyway, KEEP MAKING GREAT STORIES!

yay!

I really love this story! It's sooo cute and funny!

I swear to whatever god/goddess/cat deity there is out there...if you kill Ren...I'll be so mega- pissed~ T_T

Well, more than pissed, I'll just be upset enough to cry...don't know if that's better, but one thing I DO know is that you've made one hell of a character! I love Ren! He's so childish and cute. Would you consider making a side story about him? Like, how he meant Rinko, his life, his lost memories etc...? I think that would be wonderful. And if you won't, could I focus on it?

-AnT

1 other thing: how the regulars found out that Ryoma was a girl wasn't established well enough. Meaning that I got confused when they suddenly figured out that Ryoma was actually a girl and all that~

The story's really good so far and I'm soooo happy that it's completed! You have no idea how frustrated I get when I'm reading an awesome story and how sometimes it's JUST getting to the good part and... it hasn't been updated in about 2 years or something so, yeah, thanks.

The story story so far has been very intriguing and keeps me interested and guessing a LOT so, hats off to you! XD

ONE thing that I would liked for you to change was when the locations change, please use a 'divider' or 'pagebreak', it just makes it a bit easier to follow~

Other than that, I LOVE THIS STORY!

-AnT

So in the end it turned out that I kinda really love your story, arigato! you could try something with fem Ryo / Toyama Kintaro, and involving his team, a new city, endless possibilities, you'll think of something if the idea appeals to you... Saionara for now.

i kinda have a liking to strange stories at times, mystery is my thing ya know and it seems to be just the right amount and it all unfolds gradually, just as i like it, so if you're wondering, yes I like your story, I'm feeling quite attached to it already. Arigato, ja...

:) nice