Reviews for Love Bites
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Awww! There really is a possibility that this is what she did! Oh my beautiful Shizuru!
Koning Pin chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Ah...WOW! That was...I dunno but I have the feeling I won't forget this fic too soon. God you made the best Shizuru's inner thoughts and fights and maddness description...I can almost feel her pain and damn LOVE SUCKS SOME TIMES! Thank you...you really got me thinking. And we again come to the conclusion that size doesn't matter cause your fic was simply amazing. Thanks again!
VanillaSlash chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Perfect. Just freakin' PERFECT! I'm sure this is exactly what Shizuru was doing now! Nicely done
ssjx7squall chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
nother great one shot, and good take on what happened
silverstri chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
O.O

Wow...

beautifully written...

*still blinking*
PenNameko chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
beautifully written! i love it!
bLuShInRaiN chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
wow...

I would've believed this was what really happened that night..it really fits well.

kudos!
kae chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
WOW!please update soon!
HighLyFrusTrated chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Not only have you succeeded in pointing out that Shizuru is an obsessive psycho, you've also managed to turn her into the ultimate PERVERT.. XD
ALEXISSA2 chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Hm...interesting POV, short but good.
PineApples07 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
really like how you interpreted shizuru's emotions in this

you know, i think this could be a possible prolouge for "All You Got"

in both stories,it shows how shizuru's longing for natsuki to reciprocate her love caused her to descend into darkness

and it's through shizuru's POV so we know how her thought process works

well anyways, really beautiful piece ]

now i must go read a somewhat happy fic XP
bay y jose chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
That was good. I really felt the pain. Great one.
Lokiador chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
This is a pretty good intake of what may have been Shizuru's state of mind during this night.
yurianimeotaku chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
(writes 'Azfixiation' on tissue box) This is YOUR tissue box. I am placing it next to my computer. Between the last chapter of "All You Got" (nosebleed) and this one-shot (tears), I've needed it.

This was a heartbreaking, yet insightful look into Shizuru's psyche. I can see why her unrequited love for Natsuki pushed her into madness.

Once again, you have left me with something to think about for the next few days. This was beautiful.
Kosia chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Yeah...I think if something bad happen' ever during that nigh, this would be the most possible thing...Why ? Because even if those feelings are driving her completely mad, she still loves her. I can so totally understand...how you pictured it...she's just human, nobody should forget about it.

Well written, you have managed it, you created angst. The one that I actually really like 'cause it's true...even if you say it's effed, but...was it not in the first place ?
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