I read this fic for the second time. You have created a complex series of plots and have alluded to several scenarios. You've left us hanging any chance that you might finish the story

God, this is so well written...please, you must finish this story - it is quite exceptional!

Gah! I need more of this story.

*shakes fist at Old English grad seminar*

Lovely chapter, the mind-meld scene was a very powerful moment, I really liked it. I'm looking forward to the next installment. Oh, I almost forgot, I would love to read your new Star Trek XI story, I'm sure it will be just as interesting as this one :).

Old English grammer classe? The torture writers put us through - i.e. cliffhangers; must be the payback for their writing classes.

I liked this chapter - it was more compelling for some reason. As for more of your writings; bring them on!

It was wonderful to see another chapter even though you've left us with a cliffhanger. I really liked the mind meld scene. It makes sense that Jon would appear as a young boy but it really cranks up the angst factor as well. It's hard to think about all the things he endures and the things he does to survive when you realize that mentally and emotionally he is just a child. Ouch!

Please don't leave us dangling too long.

Huzzah! This came much earlier than I expected! This is getting good! I can't wait to see the next chapter, I wonder what'll happen? *conspirital mumbling* I wanna give Jon a big bear hug! Anyways, write on (and stuff)!

Oh...me likely...

Looking forward to next installment!

This. Is. Amazing! I just read it all the way through, and let me tell you, I was captivated. Please please please continue! This is wonderful. Great story and AU element. I hope to see more soon!

Oh please please please PLEASE write more of this story.

Please?

I'm very glad to see you've come back to this story.

I was SO glad to see a new chapter in my mailbox. Sort of like Christmas in May!

The chapter is good. Setting things up. Looking forward to how it all works out.

Thanks so much for continuing this story. I hope you're inspired to write more soon.

Missed your writing! Glad to see that you found motivation outside of virtual bribes. It seems that you're bouncing between two main scenarios - Jon's & Trip's. Despite Trip's (House MD type ) injury; I'm starting to feel less sympathetic and impatient for more from this characterization. Is it because I'm expecting less pathetic whining and more House's snarkiness? Hope you're on a roll and the next chapters will come out soon.

Tell kajexgrey - not happy that she took down Prometheus. Understand that's author's prerogative.

Sweet, two new chapters-a double treat! And a new character, it just doesn't get any better. I hope Stark and T'Pol will figure out a way to help Jon.