WOW!

love the change! LONG LIFE TO JOHN CONNOR!

Yep... John would totally destroy Cameron one day. I mean, he proved that in Born to Run. Wait... no he would give up the world for that 'machine'.

Now that is the John Connor we never saw on the show. Brilliant.

Sad story but good, and it gave me a heartache

Wow that is certainly a different reason for why Cameron was sent back. Romantic, but so tragic at the same time. Great one-shot.

That was cold. I mean it was fascinating, but extremely cold.

And I don't really like heartless Connor, I know he will have to become one, and I know it is the only way to survive, but it doesn't make it right.

I hope it's not gonna be like this in the show.

WOW! That was pure amazement, i am speechless...theres' nothing more i can say but WOW! You are a very talented writer and have a knack for pulling the reader into the scene and making them feel what the character is feeling

Cee xx

Nicely done. Not much more I can say since you did such a wonderful job.

Wow, that was so freaking amazing! Loved it! Poor John.

-Ellie

I... amazing. This is absolutely amazing! You've got talent for protraying emotion and an immense ability to touch the hearts of your readers! Thank you

Excellent. This story really shows how John becomes the man he is in the future, and that he understands what it will take, and cost him

OMG... that gave me chills! That was SO good! I totally love the way you approached the situation! Just amazing.

Wonderful, really wonderful. It feels so true to his voice on the show. Great job.

Very well written, I could see this really happening. Nice logical conclusion to why he sent Cameron back. Just because its logical doesn't mean i like it, i am a sucker for romance. Thats the only reason you don't get a perfect score.

Awsome! This has got to be one fo the best ones out there...keep up the good work!