I read all 3 storys and they were ok.

Wouldn't they notice he doesn't have a heart beat?

In the word's of "Frozen"'s Olaf: "He's C-RRRRRAAZY". His elevator doesn't go to the top anymore. Can someone say 'Stalker Shrine"? Jasper will KILL him. slowly.

U are so a wonderful writer...i love both of the stories..never stop writing

UPDATE PLEASE! *puppy dog eyes* *pouting* please please please PRETTY PLEASE! *still pouting*

wouldnt they have known Max was a vamp? smell and no heart beat.

Update soon?

Oh my gosh! This is amazing, I absolutely love it and I loved the first story too. Your version of Renesmee is absolutely adorable. I also can't believe you made Edward gay for Jasper, that was hilarious! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Will the Volturi get involved with the Cullens because someone thought they'd created an immortal child like the did in B.D? I hope not but I suppose it adds another dimension of suspense and intrigue to the story. You've done a fantastic job so far so keep up the brilliant work. I hope you update soon. :)

Spirit x

PS: I love that you have some song lyrics in the story...the ones I recognize and remember the tune to I ended up singing, lol. Now it makes me want to go watch 'Hairspray' and 'Mamma Mia' again, lol...those are two of my favourite musicals. :)

I looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved this chapter

Love the story hun,keep up the great job.

PLEASE UPDATE!

wow that is some fucked up shit Edward is CRAZY !

I love it.

i love it

must read more please give me more!