you know Normally I have a hard time reading script style writing but I greatly enjoyed this story. Enough so that I could push past and read the full story.
I absolutely adored the story. The puppies are beyond cute although I would love to see a small oneshot of the puppies older and in human form waiting for their little brothers and sisters to be born. I think it'd be adorable and to put a face to the fur. Also You never brought back Inuboys TAIL!
*flails sadly* I WANNA SEE HIM WITH HIS FLUFFY BACK! boo~ It was such a random thing to mention except for the fact that you used it for him to gain a taste of Inuyashas blood but still! I WANT INUBOYS TAIL! I'm somewhat obsessed with it now *-*

Hi! I loved this story! It was beautiful and OMG! Inu, sessh and those cute pup made my heart melt! Ahhh...um will you write another story pleaseeee!

I really love this story but it kind of seems like it was a quick and then

wow ! this is the first story with manychapters i have sat and read I LOVE THIS STORY

hey writer... tank first and foremost for the cute story...you really did it research in the animals behaviour which is annoying to inuyasha and which ibfound it funny...I really like the mood swing he had...especially the part he makes his then...the story is detail and connected well to each other...the characters presentation was great...I like how everyone ended up in sessh castle... just sad that none of inu-boy friend were there to see his new pups...alright...enough with this I'll just be on my to read others of you fanfic

interesting

This was an amazing story! At first the style it was written in made me a little apprehensive but it was still very well written. I look forward to reading more stories of yours!

Awesome... Had a good plot, fluffy scenes, drama, and not once was i confused on who was speaking!
I loved it, period... (s)

awwwww. that was great

You basically write in the style of a drama (stage production, not genre), with dialogue and stage directions and even so and so "(mumbles)" his line. I hate dramas (bad highschool memories) and such must reject your story immediately. If you decide to switch writing styles, though, I'd be happy to read it, but I come to this site for the prose, not poetry or plays.

This story was very well-done! Definitely a first where InuYasha actually has several nipples, instead of just the two (I was wondering if someone wrote a story with that), and Myoga was important to it, instead of being "jiji", or just a pest.

Kirara is a Bakeneko. Bakeneko have twin tails.

Sesshoumaru's mokomoko isn't a boa, by the way. It's part of his body. From the wikia:
"On his right shoulder is a white object that appears to have a fluffy appearance. It is his mokomoko. It give him defense and constrict people. It is, in fact, part of his body (as you can see it bleeds)."

Ah-Un, not Ah-Uhn. The actual roumaji, however, is A-Un. Ah-Un and A-Un are both acceptable terms.

I did enjoy reading this spectacular story. Great job! It's fluffy, and dramatic, and has PUPPIES! Awwweee!

This was truly a great story when i started reading it I definitely could not stop reading it, GREAT WORK I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE!

I don't know why your story doesn't have enough reviews but it's really awesome! It's a great story and I have enjoyed reading it :D

I have spent the vast majority of my day reading this story from chapter 1 through chapter 65. I must say that I enjoyed every chapter. You did a wonderful job on this. Your writing style was a odd to me at first, but after a few chapters it was nothing to me. I am so glad that I found this as I was digging through the story archives. Thank you so much for sharing!

Cute ending! -