It is indeed hot. V-e-e-ry hot! Whew! Thanks.

I love u 4 making this I never thought there were labyrinth fanfics again I love u but not like that thou

I love the way you wrote time stopping.

Fans face Wow. I'm so glad I have air conditioning in my house. Otherwise, that may have made me melt, too. LOL. Great story. Definitely conveyed their very interesting (to say the least) relationship. xD

Saw the art on deviantart first and followed it here. And now I'm fanning myself off because it just got suddenly very warm. Like everywhere. Whew.

that was a very wonderful interpretation of her picture! wonderful!

(sigh) wish that could happen to me...

Anon because the site is being stupid. -rolls eyes-

Whatever, anyway!

I think I totally need a cold shower now too. O.O Oh my. That was...steamy. I greatly approve.

I found Secretly and it led me here and I am ever so glad it did. ;)

*fans my face with my hand* Woooh, that's quite a moment they have~

I like stories like this the most. It's short, but not too short, and is so packed with detail that you can imagine what the situation might look like (I did see the picture on DA though; 'twas amazing).

Ah, the raw emotion of it all! Beautiful work!

Well, that was a lovely little daydream. Unfortunately, Sarah tends to be even more...volatile, during heat waves... I suppose it will just have to stay a dream. I rather suspect I’d be severely tongue-lashed if I tried to approach her in such an overheated state.

HAWT! XD

Whoa... I think the temperature in the room just rose about fifteen degrees or so.

And it fits so well with the picture you referenced. (Actually I saw the picture first and she had a link to your story...) The mixture of action and feeling are so perfectly blended, it makes the story, short as it is, so wonderful to read.

As to your question to what's allowed on the site, (not sure if someone answered this already) you can post more intimate scenes... just have to change the rating to M and possibly put a warning in the story summary, depending on how graphic the description is. *wink*

Hope you write more! :D

Very cool! I love Saniika. She's pretty much amazing.

Ugh, being in 90 odd degree weather sucks. :p

Definitely favorited!

I found the picture on DeviantArt and there I found the link to this story (I'm sure you've heard about that already a dozen times). I'm surprised that even though it is a little shorter than what I normally read, I LOVE it. I recently watched "Labyrinth" and fell in love. Your writing is fantastic!

XOXO,

Jazzie

I WANT MORE! That's all there is to it. I saw that pic on deviantart and I thought it was just gorgeous. Then I saw the link to this story and for a one-shot, it stands completely by itself, but I'll bet that you could take off from there with more.

-The Weary Wanderer