This is so sweet. Just give up the wrangling away from this, Re-L. The man is amazing. Also really hot. Pino is adorable. More, please!

I love this! I felt all the exact same emotions had when I watched Ergo Proxy while reading this. It reminded me why I loved it so much. Thank you.

I feel a sense of fulfillment! I love this! Thank you!

C: I like this, if only Re-L would've said something like that at the end of the series...

ohh this realxvincent story was sooo funny! I really liked it! I like your simple style too!

It's really great! But I kind of feel like if you were the dramatize the kiss and Vincent's reaction (shock, heart-attack, etc) it would be even better. ;)

Aww, this was really sweet!

Hm...I'm so torn on this one.

On the one hand, it could have been better written. The ending seemed a little sudden. The characterization and concept were nice, though. Re-l's very specific observations were a nice touch.

All that said, however, the fact that it's a Vincent/Re-l fic that's cute and fluffy and completed means I automatically have to love it.

So, to summarize, could have been a little better, but I really like it regardless.

i usually dont read oneshots, but there's so few ergo proxy fanfictions on here! but something caught my eye about yours and i got to say, you really nailed Real on this one. It's exactly how dry and sarcastic you'd expect her to be! very well done on the characterization! now I'm gonna hafta give ergo proxy a try, beefen up this section of fanfiction!

man that was corny in a way lol very cute story! n.n

This is the first Ergo Proxy story i've read yet and I like it! It was adorable! (hope you don't find that offensive!)

You should do a full continung story for Ergo proxy!

Aw this is just so sweet. I love it! Makes my heart flutters at the end of the story. And Pino is an absolute adorable!

nice! cute and too the point... maybe y'know kill the I's and It's... since it's in first person, I know it's easier to write it this way or maybe it's what you were going for? but I honestly liked it... it had that same dry atmosphere the anime had! anyway keep up the good work!

P.S will you write more? i know it's a one-shot but i can't help but feel it!

I just finished watching the series and while I;m still confused about certain parts, you seem to catch their characterization well, especially Pino. Well Done.

Haha, this is pretty adorable. Although I can see the ending being just as much her being honest as her messing with Vincent's mind, the latter actually more likely. But its a fun piece and I really hope you write more EP fiction!