For chapter 2, I really believe that you should continue it as a full on fanfic. I'm quite positive that it would receive excellent reviews and there would be a demand for you to continue it. Ah well, just my opinion :3

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Welcome back!

And Happy B-Day! Have a great day!

I loved that movie too.

I loved it Tony may be inconsistent but he does care and it shows in this peice only Tony

Wow, I just found these stories and I have lapped them up, I really enjoyed them. Thank you very much for them, I think that they are great. I have to say that the ones that I remember the most is the one when Ziva dies and it's shown through the TV reporters and the second last one that you've posted so far.

wow that was powerful and so accurate. Tony does indeed have her six

Good one, HK!

Excellent characterization I think...

Glad to see an update on this collection.

Congrats on all the reviews. You have done a great job at keeping the characters very true to those seen in the show and still adding your own twists. Can't wait to see your next chapter!

oh, i lvoe this. tony reaching in to grab the fallen candy was hilarious haha, i was laughing out loud. and i think it's just great... the story... something we'll definitely have to be dealing with in s7 when it comes to ziva's return as a "changed woman". great great work.

YAY, non-Aliyah *dances around*

*lol* sry i'm nuts, i know P *but heh... someone has to go nuts after 56 Aliyah fanfics...overload*

great chapter, its a really interesting view you have there )

now this is interesting take on the whole tony/relationship..one even i haven't thought of...ziva is always the one saying that she's strong and can take it and the men are always willing to let her do that for the most part..really well done and well written..can't wait to see what comes up next!

This was an excellent analysis of one aspect of their relationship. I have always been bugged by the way Tony teases her sometimes.

Yeah, they tease each other in equal proportions. However, in regards to the way he refers to her "ninja" qualities, sometimes it feels like he's being sarcastic and back handed rather than complimentary or respectful of her abilities. I attributed it to him being intimidated by her.

No, she wouldn't want him to hover, but she'd probably like him to show her some respect. Good chapter.

Just wanted to say that I love the way you write Ziva.

Haha! Damn, indeed. I 3 it! :D Great, great work. I love how not slick but still smart Tony's bit was. He's such a ham, that Very Special Agent.

And! An explanation for why Tony was photographed at Ziva's during That Summer. (Will we ever learn the truth? Who knows? But I like your version either way!)

-Caliente-

P.S. I've already enjoyed all your other stories, but I am a terrible reviewer. Just know that the enjoyment was immense. :)

i really enjoyed this series. you provided a lot of great insight into ziva as a character with enough angst, drama and tiva to keep me satisfy.