Aw, I love that! It's simple, but there's a lot to explore. It's believable and idk I just think this is brilliant! I especially love the last line!

holy fuck you just write the jist of my life i fucking love you! excuse my bad french

saint vas te faire encule écrivez simplement le JIST de ma vie i fucking love you! excuse mon mauvais français

awesome & cool

That was well written. I like Lake too.

so true. i like nilly and jikayla but i also love lake! good job!

Why can't I put I loved it? I DO! IT ROCKED!

there. is. NOTHING WRONG. with american eagle! and the fact that i just got these cute three-quarter pants from aforementioned store and do not wish to see it burn has nothing to do with this.

okay, it might. but whatever. i'm here to REVIEW.

jake and lily is so cute. i think it's the reason i even check out the HM fandom. actually, lilly is. because i love pairing her off with random people! anyhoo. i love the angst. it's all i'm reading these days. :3

and hell yeah, jake would look yummy in converse! *g*

That was so cute, and totally true. I liked how it went from on pov to another, with almost teh same info in it. I thought that was really cute, and added a nice little twist in the story. Lake is an okay-ish couple, like I can stand it, and I know that almost no one writes for it. LOL! This was adorable, keep writing. D

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I'm stopping there before you come into school tomorrow and kick me with you 'wild, untamed, boots'.

:3

Kiko

i am oddly intrigued by lake.

they are just...interesting. aren't they?

i really liked the ending, it worked nicely.

it wasn't too disney, too angsty, it was great. :)

I like the appropriate little phrases that get stuck bouncing in your head, and alliteration, and other things that start with A.

But mostly I like the story.

Wow. That was really good! High school cliques can be vicious and you really captured the reality of that while subtly hinting at some romance. I enjoyed it!

And your right, we NEED more Lake shippers!

Really awesome! I loved the concept! I especially liked the middle/ ending. Keep up the awesome writing! I look forward to reading more of your stuff soon! XD

Jake. Lily. Guilty? Pleasure!

Sorry. Anyway, yes, it is true that the constricting bounds of the high school heirarchy, so perfectly manipulated so that you can have just the breifest interaction with members of anotyher clique, only then to be pulled back into your own circle.

Jake Ryan would look hot in Converse.

GAHH.

I love your writing. Tres magnifique :)

However, there is nothing wrong with American Eagle.

That is all.

:D

Love,

Cailin