Beautifully written. Thank you for writing

Soo beautiful

This was well done! I love hearing Edward's POV. Oddly enough I just read a story with Edward's POV of the moments just before yours began. Your styles are different, but they blend together just right.

Loved it

Great one-shot! Very, very intense :D I loved it :) Thanks :)

Love it...

Lovely piece. Very well written and thought out. Enjoyed Carlisle's theory about fallen angels. It sounds like something he would say. To me, fallen man, damned and forsaken are more along the lines of what vampires truly are. I guess I side with Edward. The one thing I don't like is that Bella is about to cheat on him in the woods with Jacob. When she said I love you, it felt tainted, deluded because I know what is about to happen next. I know the truly doesn't want Edward after that moment. She wanted Jacob and she wanted to have his kid and make him happy. So much in fact that in BD, she dances with him and still thinks making him happy saying she wish she could. I don't know, but that doesn't sound like she truly loves Edward. I love the story but it was bittersweet me. A part of me wants Edward to find someone else but the other parts knows he never will. Anyway, sorry to rant.

Thanks for sharing,

Punz

I liked this. It makes me wonder what Bella would say if she ever heard that Edward was looked upon as an Angel of Destruction in a way. I have a feeling she'd argue, that she has another type of angel in mind for him...:)

Wow. This was diffrent but I adored it, I love this and I hope you continue to write and post more of your one-shots, connect me when you do, 'cause I can't wait!

Wow, I think you did a great job of capturing the ongoing philosophical debate between Edward and Carlisle. Very interesting. I liked the way Edward’s thoughts and mood would change quickly. That seemed to be so typically Edward. Also, the story was very well written and edited. Thanks for making it ‘T’. The last sentence was perfect. Thank you.

You captured the characters really well!

~squeakycat

Beautiful :) Amazing work

Well done. At first I thought some of the dialog Between Edward and Carlisle were quotes from the book. I really liked the part about destiny and all the Cullens being "fallen angels", giving each of them a 'destiny'.

Excellent writing

Edward's inner monologue constantly battling himself as well as others thoughts & opinions were inspiring.

Carlisle's fatherly advice & banter making Edward realise what could be is wonderful & certainly fills in gaps which we all would liked to have seen in SM's books.

Agh, I LOVE this! Great job (: