what happened to Alan? where did he go? You had him in the room in the last chapter yet there is nothing in this chapter about him even being in the room.

Hi great story. I loved the ending. There was so much love and heartache in this story.

I love this story. There are lots of great points in there. I love the bit with her as an angel. I loved the last few lines between the boys. You managed to convey so much in just a couple of lines. It was just how I imagined the boys would deal with it. Cant wait to read more of your stories

this is getting better up date soon

i am so glad you didnt kill him off. i like the little question at the end. Please update soon.

i like it now lol update soon

Interesting story. I'm really glad you didn't kill Virgil.

i don't like it i am a really big Virgil fan

nice story ! update soon !

hey cant believe you killed Virgil. I cant wait to read how the others will react to the news.