Zack's plans are always this greatest, this one being proof of that. Holy freaking crap, Seph and Cloud doing that in his office...hot begeezuz. -fans self quite profusely- I like really want you to add onto this or do a sequel to it now of Cloud showing Zack their "demonstration". ;D

Also...your anagrams for Sephiroth's name. Effing hot. And hilarious! I never would have thought of any of those.

"Thud!" XD I have to say, where so many of your fics tend to be dark and depressing, this one keeps making me get a stitch in my side from laughing.

Nice story.
1sunfun

I love your writing! For the nth time.

I don't know why it's been so long since I read this series! Makes me feel like a bad fan. I really do love your writing. I kinda forgot about this one (which is a shame!) This site is so distracting. I know which fics are good... which ones I love. But I STILL spend way too much of my life wading through bad fics! I can never seem to find exactly what I want when I want it, but I keep searching instead of going back to what I know. I should just read your fics more often. This one's very funny, as always. Just the most random little comments & details are what really brings the humor, although Levine on the floor was funny too. I love these characters... *off topic* & those anagrams? xD I think I like Hipster Ho best. _

Lol, nice 'gift' Zack. As for the anagrams of Sephiroth's name, I can't decide between hipster ho or perish hot. Both would be extremely funny as nicknames that Zack and Cloud would use.

I love the way you always wright your storys! This one was very funny.

First of all, I am finally back on reviewing your lovely Decorum arc! Man, it feels like it’s been forever and a day since I’ve finally gotten the time to review anything of yours. I’ve missed it terribly, I really have.

Before I begin, I’d like to tell you two short things (I’ll make it quick, I promise you!): I have a bad habit I’ve fallen into lately with this site. I tend to hold a lot of the amazing authors on this site, all of those who have eloquent uses of language, as well as a million of other things that I really love about them…and I put them on pedestals. Then, I looked up your LJ and laughed hysterically, for you enjoy the same things we as people do! You’re a regular person, a human being, and I would do well to remember that and not think of you, other authors, and select talented individuals as anything deserving of the title of human. But still, I deeply admire you, and you are one of several inspiring ff authors I look up to.

Secondly, I started reading this story before I went to dinner, and the part where Zack comments about hula dancing made me laugh until I cried. Then, I did something I’ve never done before: fall to the floor, laughing hysterically. Just picturing Sephiroth hula dancing…*shakes head* It’s a sight for sore eyes, don’t you think? XD Thank you for that hysterical image! Seriously, you really, really know how to make someone laugh. _

Now onto the actual review! I love love the components of the ZSC relationship! I like how you can take something I haven’t liked until a few months ago (i.e: a threesome) and made it plausible and worth my time to read. Your characterization of Zack leaves me stunned, and I laugh every time you write him, for he is definitely in his canon self. You pull off these characters so well, it leaves me breathless, both from laughter, and clutching my heart, because these characters have become dear to me. Thank you for doing it without any flaw I can see. For, there is none in my mind.

Also, I am one of the biggest fans of Sephiroth/Cloud you will ever meet. Something about the components of their relationship make me smile every time I think of them. I love how intimate they are in this story, and how tender Sephiroth is being with him. He is careful to not hurt him, or force anything on him. I HATE the stories where they make Sephiroth out to be either a rapist/pedophile and the like. For, in my mind, he WOULD NEVER do anything like that. Thank you for portraying him in one of the most golden, tender spotlights of them all. *smiles*

I love the title also, “Infiltration” for I think of some silly little mission Cloud has to go through to infiltrate Sephiroth’s office. For, Cloud is a deviation and a lovely aberration from Sephiroth and Zack’s lives, one that will bring hints of light into their SOLDIER lives. This is simply a beautiful arc, and it will always ALWAYS live on in my heart. *grins*

Lastly, your anagrams? They had me in stitches! I sent them to a friend of mine, and they cheered her up, for she was worried about something, and it made her laugh. Thank you for bringing a smile to my face, and for literally making a beautiful storyline.

P.S: when I get the money this summer, I’m buying your book, and then messaging you on all of the good things I loved about it. P.P.S: that was undoubtedly kind of you to friend request me on LJ, you’re such a sweetheart. *grins*

~Luna

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damn i love this! XDDD My God! Seph! Cloud! XDDD

and the last part is just lol XD

Cloud would be more than willing to demonstrate it to Zack *lol*

great story! i just love how the way you describe their relationship

Haha! Amaya and the "thud" noise...classic.

Such a great interaction between these three men...

I like it! **

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THE REVIEWING FOOL

This story made me giggle a lot and I liked it. I just adore the extra characters you add in, they always fit so well.