Reviews for The Revelation
Anon.Y.Mouse chapter 1 . 5/28/2019
Really good story, but I’d have liked to have seen a bit more of the crew’s reaction.
angry penguin chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Love it.
HyperCaz chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
I love this. D
Lozza-bear chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
That was great! Like fantasy, I also loved the part where Kate's like, 'screw it, I'm leaving tomorrow anyway!'. Fan-dinkin-tastic work :D

Hope you're writing some more stuff soon! :D
fantasy77 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I loved this story esp, Kate's thoughts. I love the bit when she thinks "Screw it I'm leaving tomorrow." LOL I loved it. Though I felt you rushed the ending a little though. There wasn't time for Kate to sorta reflect about it a lot. So are you going to do this story from Mike's pov? I'd love to read it. Thanks for the awesome read!
Miss.Mil chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
That was a nice story!

I liked how you put their thoughts in there!

Keep up the great work! :D