| Reviews for The Revelation |
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Anon.Y.Mouse chapter 1 . 5/28/2019 Really good story, but I’d have liked to have seen a bit more of the crew’s reaction. |
angry penguin chapter 1 . 7/30/2011 Love it. |
HyperCaz chapter 1 . 1/9/2009 I love this. D |
Lozza-bear chapter 1 . 3/10/2008 That was great! Like fantasy, I also loved the part where Kate's like, 'screw it, I'm leaving tomorrow anyway!'. Fan-dinkin-tastic work :D Hope you're writing some more stuff soon! :D |
fantasy77 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008 I loved this story esp, Kate's thoughts. I love the bit when she thinks "Screw it I'm leaving tomorrow." LOL I loved it. Though I felt you rushed the ending a little though. There wasn't time for Kate to sorta reflect about it a lot. So are you going to do this story from Mike's pov? I'd love to read it. Thanks for the awesome read! |
Miss.Mil chapter 1 . 3/9/2008 That was a nice story! I liked how you put their thoughts in there! Keep up the great work! :D |