I loved this so much! I don't think it was out of character at all! :)
I really liked the line 'Moments like these were truly what any person should live for.'
Soo cute :)

Oh my gosh, so sweet, a little more gagging but gagging on fluff of something I love as much as Loveless is not terrible at all! :D So sweet, I love it nicely!

Heya, I loved your fic it was soo cute. I just recently got into Loveless, well considering the fact that i haven't really read or watched it yet, but amv's are good for something, right? Lol, well just thought I'd leave a comment and tell ya I enjoyed reading your fic..

HAPPY FLUFFYNESS!

~Immortal Sailor Cosmos

I love this fic, it's so kind and cute !

Nice work!

*so adorable seven dies of heart attack* *revives self by eating chocolate bar* So kyut!

this is so sweet! very cute

Very nice, I like the way you portrayed Ritsuka's character in this. He always did seem the type who really needs a hug (or several in a row) but would NEVER say so.

Now I wanna write a Loveless fic... maybe along the theme of a Shakespeare line I read long ago... "What's in a name? A rose by any other name would smell as sweet."

I think it was from Romeo and Juliet.

so not stupid, i know how u feel about being obsessed with the show, it's kind of hard not to be! lol loved the story tho!

It's definitly not stupid. O:

There was some parts that I found cliche' in the beginning but the ending was very sweet. :]

Good job

-Jordan

It's no OOC so don't worry. And I love fluff so this was great! I've become obsessed with Loveless too. I had found the anime one day and loved it so much I searched everywhere online for the manga. It's definitely one of my favorites, even though it's so depressing! Anyway, if you write more Loveless fanfiction, let me know! :)

~kuro

This was really cutte and i luved it!

it's NOT stupid! it's cute!