Loved all 19 chapters and look forward to more of your writing. Thanks

Love, Love, Love it!

Hi Jat, reading these again when I should be doing other things. Love em...cheers penni ;)

Ok, now I know what happened to Darius! LOL! Wonderful story!

Hi Jat, love going back to these stories. No matter how many times I read them I still think that your Rayna is the absolute best partner for Josef of all the Moonlight fanfic I have read - and that is quite a bit lol. Well done to you for creating such a wonderful character, his Beauty, and them together in this series is just so magical to me...thank you...cheers penni :O)

You handled the fight extremely well. I'm glad Josef felt bad about having to end his sire's life. When he felt lost, it was truly understandable. Everyone acted as they should. You left Lance hating Josef but helpless for the moment until he goes back to France. Coraline reacted as a 'child' should at the death of her sire. Who sired Cynthia? Was it Coraline? Did you write about that too?

Good story and a good writer. Who could ask for more, except for more stories. I hope your Thanksgiving holiday was a good one. VR

I'm still catching up on this one. What do you mean, you're not good at action. I was impressed. Now, on to the final chapter. Knowing ahead of time about Darius will not deter. In my book, the sire/fledgling/heir relationship is idealized. It is a shame when it is ruined, but Darius and Coraline wanted too much from their creations, like an overbearing parent.

This was a great story. Is the "family" behind the upheaval of the markets we experience now in 2011? I wouldn't be surprised.

OMG, Darius is such a villain, powerful, strong, ruthless. But Josef is holding his own. Can't wait to read how this goes.

Love the romance!

This was great. So Darius and Lance caused this to get Mick to perk up. They never heard of telephone? Letters? Email? Darn Ancient Vampires!

Oh my, now I understand. Love the reunion! And the vampire is very careless or even bound on exposing them all. What's up with that? Great storyline!

Ahhh, Rayna is a good person. But 1929 Sarah wasn't in the equation, so what happened there? Can't wait to find out.

I'm very curious about Rayna, and about the murders. I just hope the cases aren't connected.

This is a very intriguing start. Can't wait to find out what the case is about. Love the way they are living together comfortably.