Kind of nightmarish. I like it very much. :)

I only just recently found your brilliant GW stories. Your Heero is damned near perfect, and I love the way he's fleshed out through all the different stories you've posted. I just love this line: "And if I can pilot my own body and mind, I can pilot you."

I really liked this- I've always been imagining what it would be like in the Zero system, and this sort of hyper-mode is very interesting. I'd been looking around quite a bit today to see a fic of Heero that wasn't HeeroxDuo or HeeroxRelena or something. XD

It felt like there was a nice edge to his emotion and personality. You really were able to portray his determination and strength, as well as bit of stubborness. XD

I especially liked the ending- "Dr. J didn't build you for me. But I do wonder if he built me for you."

Finally something that isn't blasphemous yaoi!

Never really considered that Zero was a sped up version of Heero. But now that I think about it...well, I still don't think so, because we don't really see much of Zero's personality.

Your spelling and grammar are fine, but they could use a little improvement here and there.

This was creepy good. It was so intense and very thought provoking. It is highly insightful and I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for the read ;)

~Thalia013