| Reviews for Afloat |
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The-KLF chapter 1 . 1/15/2017 Wowwwww! Though I like it as it is, I would have liked to see more from her, some kind of reaction to what happened! |
uwprincess chapter 1 . 5/31/2011 That was harsh...so sad, good writing but sad! |
Wmst chapter 1 . 3/11/2011 Excellent literate smut! The line about how "she smell[ed] nothing like the despair and rust that filled his life." was a great touch. And the ending was perfect! |
jessi chapter 1 . 4/13/2010 Great story! I loved the idea of the zero gravity! It is just a shame it had to end so soon! |
Mouse and Stupid Productions chapter 1 . 11/30/2009 Mal... gr... |
Serenitychan13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2008 Hoh-oh! That is WICKED! I loved every word of it. Please, don't feel the need to stop with just this! Continue it! By all means, continue it! |
Serene River chapter 1 . 4/5/2008 Holy crow! That was really well-written, and the ending was really, really sad! But it worked, actually. I could see Mal saying it. I think you should write a sequel! The repercussions of this encounter and whatnot. It would be fantastic. |
GillianRose chapter 1 . 3/7/2008 intense - I loved the premise of the story (seriously sexy and romantic) and the imagery of the zero-grav shuttle. good job with the complicated emotions too. |