This is really cute. I like it. :) and I agree that Tenten is the one who has the mother's character the most.

HEY! You should like totally continue this and make it so that Tenten uses this 'momminess' against all the shinobis. '-.-

Haha that was cute:) and I can relate I'm the mommy of our high schools band haha

What a delightful fic about the inner workings of Tenten! This was not only well written, but completely plausable. Loved this! Great job!

What a great idea. Somehow, that single line, "The three sand siblings called her 'mom' too." made me giggle ... just the thought of stoic Gaara saying it made me want laugh. Lovely story. :D

And even Hinata calls her mom? Wow. But nice idea :)

Aw! This was great, seriously! :D

I've never really though of Tenten in that manner, a very interesting take on her relationship with the other shinobi- very, very good.

I loved it :D

Kiba's amazing, as usual. ;)

I would suggest a second read-through, their where some mild spelling and grammar mistakes that a quick re-read would catch easily.

Very, very good. :)

aww! This reminds of my friend who's our 'Mom'. She hates it but she doesn't realize we do it cause we love her. _

THis was enjoyably written. I had fun reading this. THe dialouge was funny and believeable which is great since Tenten's interactions are usually minimal.

This was a lovely oneshot. _

aww this was amazing! cute3

Is this a hint of Romance or friendship?

It makes me wonder, what would Tenten's other "children" do for their mother? Can you make another story to this, maybe a mother's day with Tenten and her "kids"? Or maybe a serious one were Tenten got hurt?

And it makes me wonder, who would the generation call dad?

As a mom of four i absolutely loved this story!

Very well done and a great unique story. To good to be a just a oneshot.I could see it a series of mother stories for poor Tenten and her band of kid shinobi LOL

Great story! I loved it! :D

Dude, all my friends call me mom! And for good reason… I take it as a complement though.

Here's why:

"Emily, go change out of those wet clothes or you'll catch your death of cold!"

"Emily, clean up your mouth! We are in the presence of virgin ears."

"Holy crap, Eric will be in sixth grade next year! It feels like it was just yesterday that I was holding him and all the parents were afraid I'd drop him…"

"Cari, are you doing your homework?"

"Cari, you'll get in trouble if you don't do your homework!"

"CARI, DO YOUR HOMEWORK!"

~Mooneyº

Tainted Moonlight,

When I read the summary I thought the mum might be Temari, the the others, her brothers. You certainly carry your special touch over to everything ou write! This was intriguing; a real rare scenario that I probably wouldn'tve read under normal circumstances.

Realistic, awesome, well-written.