The short paragraphs make this story work soooo well! They allow you to pack so much emotion, and a really long timeline in less than 10k words, without any of it feeling rushed.
And I really liked your plot, it makes a lot of sense, and you made it work, with amazing characterization.
Thank you so much for sharing this story!

Holy shit... I haven't cried while reading anything ever, but this... This made me tear up mad. This is just so good. Oh God!

I never thought I'd love this so much, you're AMAZING

Thank you, that’s one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time, and the way you addressed the subject matter? Excellent

The "It's a lie, for now, but Petunia is determined to make it become truth." line is so real because its one thing to be unbiased but another to unmake your own biases
I love this

wow I love this but it could be so fleshed out it feels like these are a chapter or arc notes.

Wonderful

This was heartbreakingly beautiful. The story I didn't know I would love to read. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

This plot just totally blew my mind, but in a good way.

Nice fanfic!
Probablyt one of the best ones I have ever read.

In chapter 7 "Once we got there, will you become my wife?" migth be better as "Once we get there, will you become my wife?"

Thanks for writing and have a great day!

I never thought I’d say this but
go Dudley

the feels

Absolutely brilliant writing!

Wow! Such an amazing, heartfelt, sensitive story! Thank you!

Beautiful tale.