I left non-canon stories and I was really enjoying this one. It's a shame you never finished it.

I know it has been 10 years roughly but I hope you cone back to this

Update?

I'm happy that Jacob doesn't ruin his wedding or family but it's very unfair for Bella and Embry. Jenny is unfair too: i can understand that she's upset but Bella suffers more than her if she couldn't have babies. So Jenny has to shut up

Jacob is very immature and selfish: I hope that someone could find a solution because it's really too sad for Bella and Embry if they can't have kids

it's really an amazing story !

Jerry! Thank you for writing this! Specially once it's hard to find Bella/Embry pairings! I'm enjoying the plot so far and also your flow of thought. I usually just read complete fanfictions, and I must admit I started this one by accident, however, I'm not regretting it! Hahaha
Congrats girl! I love Embry and also this Bella.
Jake, well, what he did was selfish, stupid, mean and reckless - not good, nops.
Hey, what about the force that made Jacob be sent backwards?
Aaand I hope that Embry's mark on Bella will make Jake's mark fade.
Also Charlie and Bella being closer is great! And her career, it's all sweet and well fitting.

There some points where you switch Jake for Embry or his/her, but just a few times and in different chapters (must be just a matter of reviewing). Also, you wrote peace where it should be piece and lying where it should be laying, but I guess lying is used too, just not as common.

Thank you again, see you (I hope soon, but as a writer too, I know how it works - God, I have a lot of stories to upload or finish hahaha)

omg mg plz update soon ;)

Hate this was never finished. Had great potential.

Dang when you gon update I'm waitin

This story is great it's awesome. I hope that you come back to it.

I am loving this story.

Oh man, I was so sad to come to this chapter and see there wasn't another chapter. Lol I've gotten so hooked on the relationship between Bella and Embry and seeing how things go with Jacob. Anyway, I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. Keep up the good work!

I figured that it wasn't anywhere close to finished. I hoped there would be more of it though. Why wasn't Jacob punished so far? What are they waiting for. It doesn't seem fair to Bella and Embry. Interesting theory with the shared DNA. Very intriguing. I pretty sure that you won't continue this 7 years later, still if hi did I would read it. One if the best Embry stories out there. I loved every bit of it and am kind of sad there isn't more.

This chapter was amazing. I love Embry more and more with every sentence he says, with every thought he has. Excellent job!
I wanted Jacob'a blood several chapters ago, now I kind of demand it. I have a feeling that now Bella does too, not only Embry.