Continue!

On ch 1 u wrote I do NOW own Spyro.

You must continue. This was one of the first fanfics I read and I loved it :D

I do not mind if you change anything, but please write more.

Id like you to try to continue the story as it is.

I like it and dont believe it needs to be changed

Hey Ru... I know I haven't talked with you for a while, It's Dark Dragon... the kid you ended up going into a metroid discussion with when I joined Scar's forum. How are you? might I ask, and I agree with some points, but looking at it from a developer's point of veiw.

What do most people care about in this world, currently the phrase is Money makes the world go round. therefore DotD being a fan game is well justified under the fact that the developers took this attitude. "Money is on my mind, and nothing will take it off. the more I have the better."

honestly I wish you would be able to finish it. and as I said before I'm not asking you too, but it was great Rping with you when I had the chance. and I am truly sorry I tended to be offline alot. Your writing is superior to alot of other people's and it was an honor reading your stories. Sadly, you did what you had to do, and I understand.

"There ain't no rest for the wicked, money don't grow on trees. you can't hold back, you can't give up, although you wish you could. there ain't no rest for the wicked, until we close our eyes for good." truer words have never been spoken, and they should never be forgotten. never will we have time to rest, we are always on the chopping block. May the Balance guide you in your actions, balancing out the fate of the world for better or worse.

On the Blood of our Fathers, On the blood of Our Sons. Protect our Covenant from the wicked lies of Heresy. Above all, Protect that which the world holds dear. ~ Sublime Transcendence, King of the Death Dragons

I just have one word to say about this...

Amen.

I agree 100%. I'm so sick of Cyndorks posting on how "OMGSEXAY" Cynder is and attacking everyone who doesn't share their perverted dragon fetish. Then people try to deny that she's a fanservice character. Ha ha ha, GOOD ONE. I'd be willing to bet TLoS would lose half its main fanbase if Cynder (excuse me, I mean Brick) had been male or otherwise not curvy.

Even without the fantards I there wouldn't have been much to like about TEN Cynder. She should have stayed a villain; at least she was interesting that way, even if she was a bit fanservice-y. At least she had personality and wasn't an Angsty Sue.

I'm one of those that you said this wasn't directed at, but I feel that what the company did with Cynder was interesting. That's just my feelings, I'm not trying to start an arguement. I'm just stating. I got use to the fact of all these cahnges in her by looking at it from many different views. Just throwing it out there. I'm sorry that this situation had to end your story. I hope nothing like this will effect you from stopping your other stroies.

Wear anger as your armor, wield revenge as your blade, and carry darkness as your shield - Shadow Dragon 537039

Yeah, maybe people will stop bothering you about this now.

You sir, have just won the internet. That was one of the best rants against Cynder-obsessed persons I have seen in a long time. And it was blunt and to the point! You, sir, are very good at getting your point across. Bravo!

when i got the notification that this had been updated i was like "wtf what story is this?" lol then it all came back. anyway, a fic is certainly an unorthodox place for a game/creepy pervs rant, but I dont judge. anyway, I havent played TEN or DOTD, but the fact that you somehow found dragon porn is as disturbing as the pron itself. the interwebs is a terrible place. I just feel bad that now you cant unsee what you did. For me, I thought the spyro games were aimed at kids, and the originals were. the reboot and subsequent attempt to be 'all dark and stuff' was lame at best. that and the dialogue was pretty much awful throughout ANB and the little bit of TEN i played while intoxicated at a friends house. anyfart, fantards are everywhere, for almost every topic man, there is no escape from that. as for the cleches it was the gaming equivalent of a straight to dvd sequel of a good movie. ANB was kinda fun imo, but after that it was pretty much walk, fight walk fight end. I've rambled enough i believe...

Well, If you don't continue your story,then I have to say, You did one hell of a good job, but what do you mean about what writing fanfics has done to you? Sorry if I'm being rude or nossey, I'm just curious. Well, If you say no to the PM I sent you, then have a good time with your life and you should seriously consider taking on a writing career. I think you have an amazing talent.(By the way. This review was sent right after the pm incase you said no.) Well, I have one thing to say.

Arta du evarinya ono varda Rurik-vodhr

You'll have to look the meaning up in the ancient language.

Sincerely,

Esgaloth the Dragon Rider

Good Luck!

i have to say i don't like that you left out of nowhere i can understand wanting a break or something i don't know you but you posted an author note on chapter 9:nightmare that said that there was a high possibilty of you leaving after the memories trilogy i'm just trying to make an argument about this i know it's not my place but i think alot of people are probably upset that you just left the cliff hanger the story was so perfect drama action violence multiple plot twists and good detail i don't know why you left it but iv'e got to say i bet that about 4/5 or 3/5 people who have read this story want you to come back and finish it i never actually talked to you iv'e never talked to anybody on here but i just have to say that you are a great writer and i plan on going to deviant art to see what you gave up this perfect story for i'm not going to complain anymore after this but for the sake of the people who were wrapped up in this story(ironically probably only gonna be me wanting him to finish)at least finish the story on deviant art after all your writing on there i don't want to ramble and i know that almost nobody cares what i have to say but i just can't see a story given up on when it was still getting better and better i'm sorry if i have wasted your time but i'm not sorry about saying that i feel that this story needs to be finished again i'm sorry for wasting time of whoever reads this

Well you have to go where life takes you...so wherever that is I hope that you find success. It has been fun reading your stories...you were one of the orginal writers on this section if I remember right...but anyways at least you did leave a note so that everybody knows. Good luck with whatever you do on DeviantArt and hope that you visit again someday. CYA!

I'm sad to hear that. I just began reading Memories and it's good. I hope you have a successful future.

Wear courage as your armor and wield honor as your blade - Shadow Dragon 537039