Keep writing. The suspense, the plot, the characters, all of it. Even though I know the Rowling series I was still hooked on the way you presented it. You have a natural gift for it. Please ask permission from J.K. Rowling to do a mini-series. Perhaps more in depth back stories from behind the scenes like various attacks on different houses the types of jobs wizards and witches held to earn money, perhaps even linking to some modern day conspiracy theories.

This was really cute. Quite a few grammar and spelling errors, but the plot was really interesting. Good job!

I would just be careful what language you have your characters use because sometimes they sound rather homophobic

Looooove!

I've read this story several times now... And I still love it...! THANKYOU for writing it!

I LOVED IT!LOOOKING FORWARD TO ANOTHER STORY!

This was amazing and I loved it so much and thank you for writing the best story everrrrrrrrr! Xoxox

love this story but I want point out in the UK we don't say Bandaid, it's plaster.

congratulations on this story i really liked it.i liked how you came up with your own idea that lily's life wasn't fully perfect and also how you gave james a brother and sister. very good storey in my more james and lily fanfics. pls

I have read this fic three times now... I literally love it so much! It's one of my favourites on the site :)

This was very cute, funny and very well written

This was a great fic. A bit different to your average James and Lily, but really enjoyable

I am DYING of laughter, at 12:50 at night, and I refuse to stop reading!

Amazing amazing amazing! I'm hoping for a sequal! Please! haha I dont get why this story doesent have at least a thousand reviews! It's great! Well hopefully this will help on your way to 1000! This story is just amazing! Well that's pretty much it. Byeeeeee

This is Awesome!