Ron cusses, but Harry doesn't, and Luna doesn't. It makes them OOC if you give them language that they wouldn't use. And BTW, Ron sticks to British cusses, like bloody hell, not American cusses.

I'm not really enjoying this so I'm going to stop reading here.

Needs more proofreading.

I think Luna is pretty unique and hard to write just as she came from the pen of JKR. Piling on even more uniqueness doesn't really add anything to the character. I'll read on, though, and see how things develop.

Please do continue this! I love the story!i love Harry/Luna pairings! :)

keep going

Love the story can't wait for the next chapter

this story should be finished

Hi please please please finsish the story! Its too good to be left there!

The Werewolf thing is making me a bit sad, since I dislike reading about such forced traditions, and I'll continue to read this, but I hope that the story doesn't have Luna being forced to do such things with people other than Harry... I sincerely hope he's the only one she ends up doing things with, despite the "Various pairings" warning.

thats a bitch of a cliffhanger...

but its an AWESOME story

That was really, really great and i hope that you continue really, really soon.

I'd give you two thumbs up but That'd be kind of hard to do when I'm typing so just take my word on it, great chapter!

keep writing

Awww wh stop writing it? it was awesome! plz plz consider continuing ur fanfic! i hope u will update even after some years have past

the story is great an i hope you update soon because i cant wait to finish this story.

and i'm terribly sorry for you loss but please do update.

come on write a new chap pleese, im realy looking forward to what heppends..