Reviews for Breathless |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Will Don get to Kayliegh in time? What is the deal about Webber and her? How come he knew to stake out Dons apartment? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great. please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like your stories. no, rephrase that, i love them. thank you for the chance to read them. cant wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, nice twists, i like the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sorry it took so long to read I love the story, can't wait for the update, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! poor Kayleigh! He is evil! That was such a lovely chapter, you write Don very well. Looking forward to more! :o) Kay x |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really glad to see that you updated. This was a great chapter and I hope that you're muse stays with you so you can write some more! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ello! Please Update! I love FlackOC storys, but there aren't many, and this one rules! A.A.A XOXOXOX |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is brilliant! just like a real storyline! Please continue lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story can;t wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hoping something more would happed in this chapter but you still did a great job, please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the storyline so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg... write more soon... Can't wait... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good so far.. Can't wait to read more... |