I love this. So adorable :3

This reminds me a little of high school debut hahaha

I loved this it was like I was in the story you are great at writing it just drew me in keep up the good work

This story balances on that very thin line of 'good' and 'questionable' writing. So I will have to settle for the claim that it has components of both. The good is that Sasuke was surprisingly very IC after their first meeting. Except for that love declaration... which I will touch on later. Sakura's journey to learning about romance was duly entertaining and humorous. But now I'll have to get into the actual critiquing...

First off, I'm not sure if you had intended for Sakura to be immature about this or if this were your own personal thoughts but her disgust with Chouji's size and 'nerds' made for an off-putting aspect to your writing. If it had been your intent to show Sakura's immaturity then perhaps these statements could have been worded better but if not then I believe it is unfair to shove Chouji aside, even for "comedic" effects, just because he's overweight. True this is a SasuSaku story so it's not like he would have been in the running in the first place for her criteria but it's the principle of the matter that I am trying to get at. Another point is that when Sasuke whipped out a piece of paper and pen out of nowhere and Sakura immediately thought of how nerds only do that (so 'did I get the wrong person for this job?') - again, I know you probably had only placed that thought there to create a humorous effect but funny or not, it is statements like these that one should be careful of because it propagates certain ideals, regardless if it was the author's intent or not. That particular one implied that nerds are not fit for love/romance - you probably did not intend for that message and only meant for it to be a lighthearted scene but again, ideals can still pulse through any kind of writing, authorial intent or not.

Now onto the actual romance itself... I was not very convinced by Sakura and Sasuke's love for each other. Interested in? Yes. Infatuation? Yes. But love? Not quite. As you had pointed out yourself, she hardly knows the guy! Yes, there are some qualities that she has picked up about him - that he doesn't talk a lot, caustic, caring in his own way, and so forth but other than that? Nada. The same goes for Sasuke, especially him - a man who did not even respect females until Sakura came along. And for that matter, shouldn't she have been a bit concerned about how he treats girls? Obviously here, you show that he treats her better than how he normally treats them but is that truly enough to erase his past conquests and morals just like that? Since this is obviously a lighthearted story, I can see how resolving those issues would take on a much more angsty route than what the story intends for but it is just something to think about. Also, something that had puzzled me... isn't it hypocritical of Sasuke to judge Itachi for his manwhore ways when Sasuke is no better than he is in that department?

Another thing that confounded me was Sakura's obsession with his looks. Near the end, you try to have her claim that it was more than just his appearance that drew her in but in nearly every scene, she always mentions how bedazzled she is by his face (or body). Not to mention her final statement of how could an 'amazing, handsome' boy fall for an ordinary girl like her... How can she think him more amazing than her when she's seen how he treats girls (barring herself) and presents one of the most caustic personalities around? Sure, he shows some pleasant facets such as replacing her broken phone and actually helping her out with this task but 'amazing' is a bit much, no?

Anyways, this one-shot definitely has a lot of potential and with enough squeaking and cleaning, it definitely could be something great. With the exception of the kinks and holes I talked about, I did enjoy reading about Sakura's fumbling and stumbling.

Me to cause ever heard of a qoute "There's a thin line between love and hate ..''

Probably one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read. Not only was it well written, but the story was very original and time consuming. Let me just say that I love the fact that you made this fic all in one chapter. It's so good mainly because I have read many multichaptered fanfics before, but they never give this fandom good justice. I have read so many fanfictions that have 20 to more chapters, but the author either ends up getting tired of the plot and they just end up wasting their story, or they completely forget about the story and they just abandon it. I applaud you for your awesome writing skills. Keep up the great work! GO SASUSAKU!

Okay. So Sasuke gets to fuck all the whores he wants and Sakura falls for him because he acts like the biggest douche bag? You call yourself a writer? This fucking sucked and Sakura gets no justice.

I loved this. I thought at first it was 50 shades of grey kindof. :)

This was like the best story ever! I really love it! :D

Awww! So cute! I really liked how Sakura "made him fall in love with her". :)

That was really good! Love it!

love Love LOVE! its wonderfuland funny and cute

I would have wanted this to be a multi-chappie fic... to get more details about their whole three-week lesson... and how exactly they fell in love. This was really good but it felt as if it was done in a hurry- too fast-paced. :)

I love it still thouggh, especially the last part- the article. :D

Keep it up! ;)

that was soooo cute (:

OMG! i loveed this story its so well developed

aand amazingly put together awesome work its was

sooooooo entertaining to read cant wait to read more of

ur work great job :)