Cool story,I really like it! Update soon!

This is great! Please write more!

I love the interaction between the characters in this chapter. :) Between Elena standing up to Joshua and Drake being knocked silly, it was pretty fun. And now I'm super curious to find out what it really was that made him not march the past two years. Hope Ari comes back soon.

Ari reminds me of myself, just a bit more of a rebel. And, I don't have random colored hair.

And I would totally do the whole switching music on the iPod thing. Which is why putting that is a terrible idea.

Actually *diabolical eyes* If only i could manage to steal my section leaders iPod. That would be fun. Or my sister...

Nice. Poor Drake...at least he didn't have to deal with Ari. I think it's a little confusing with the references to both Drake and Markus marching Crusaders... And if he did before, why isnt' he now? It's not like he aged out or anything... lol, but that's me, just being a corps nut. :)

aw, poor Drake. :) hopefully he'll learn to have some fun in life soon. and some new music will be good for him. keep writing, update soon.

I love this story! Please update, like...SOON! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT THE FLUTES WILL DO TO HIM NEXT! ( I'm a flute myself, and I admit, we're a tad diabolical ) SO PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Yay! I enjoy this story! Whoo flutes! Hehe.

This story is so awesomely awesome! XD Wow took me long enough to find it...I love marching band.

I love your story! ] (I play the flute too!)

Lol. I call it condensation too!

This is kinda what OUR marching band is like; I don't even know where to begin to start comparing them! So smuch is alike, that it's scary. Our drum major is uptight as well, but he happens to be my best friend-he's head drum major and he's a junior. The assistant drum major Abby is a senior, and yet she's really REALLY mean. But, Isai takes things seriously like the rest of us do; but he doesn't yell at us like Abby. Oh! I completely forgot to say that this is frickin' amazing! If this had ratings, I would give it 20 out of 10.

Yay! I love this story, and I love flutes!

OMG Nuclear, I know the feeling! I'm playing piccolo now too. And I'm not using my flute. Yay blowing peoples eardrums out by playing high G! Or high C... -innocent look-

But to anyone who reads these reviews, I wrote my chapter over a week ago from when this was posted. Like, for serious. So it's not my fault it's this late. It'll be my fault when Chapter 12 is this late. .

Yay. I love it!

I are saddened, I'm not using my dear flute for marching band, i got switched to piccolo. Though I guess its a good thing... I actually like it. Yay first chairness! It are fun blowing peoples eardrums out!

OMG! This is amazing! you MUST continue it! I love it just like I love meh dear flute :D

-Hailey