Hmm well personally the original version is still one of my favorite one shots ever. This version is really good and I did enjoy reading it but I personally prefer the original.

loved em both awesome job

i loved the second version, but im still faithful to the first version. you have definitely grown as a writer, but the first version is probably my fav hsm oneshot!

:) Sweet. I love the original and this one. So sweet :)

:) Sweet. I love the original and this one. So sweet :)

aw this was really cuute! i liked it better! i read ur other story, "what youve been missing", and i loved it too! i couldnt review on it for some reason thoughh...but great job on this!

This was MUCH Better! I LOVED the original and thought it was Great but this was much better and ha amazing detail!

I think even though I have a pretty goo idea what was up with his knee, I think that might be because I've seen my bother go through it numerous times. Maybe tell us what is wrong. I think that's the bit you feel is missing.

I kinda like the way we heard the first part of Troys conversation but not the end, though you know what's bein said.

I noticed one slip up: "in front of her" *friends* is missin there, I think.

Sheepishly, she swiped at them with her hands. She hated crying in front of her, and she was practically throwing herself a pity fest.

LOVED it!

~Crystal

Oh man! I LOVE it! What happened?

~Crystal

im sorry i was really confused by this revised chapter. could you mayb explain it. i couldnt make sense of it.

I read the original version first, just so I could see how it was different, and it is amazing to see how you have grown as a writer. I loved it.

firstly, you have grown as a writer.. and im loving it! so bravo to you for that :D

altough the other story was good, and i loved it aswell, this one was just pwoah.. and i loved from start to finish.

i loved how you had shown the emotion and feelings in this chapter, thats what i love about some authors, that you can really see thier maturatiy as a write when they incoporate such feelings and emototions of the main people as well as the environment around them and how they incoporate that into the story, which makes you so involved in the actual scene that its amazing.

the only thing i did like more in the last story, was the ending. the whole kissing part just made my heart melt lol. hehe :D either way i love the story.. both versions :D

cant wait to read more of your work, so happy that you have been updating more :)

aw! that was sweet! I loved it! keep up the great work! :)

OMG, OMG... THIS WAS JUST WOW!

JENNIFER

One of the best one shots ever!

I loved it! Amazing job!

- Nel xo.