damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.

Hey can hinata harem too I like her

well this is vary good but this has not been updated for 4 years now so I hope you didn't abandon this story but if you did put it up for adoption. I agree don't let this story die

update it damnit I hate seeing a good story die like this

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it's it is / it has
"it's" is not the same as "its"!

Like "I'm" is not the same as "my/mine".

"its own", "its eyes" etc.!

Cool story continue please.

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I want to see more, I love the way this was put together.

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sad this hasn't been updated in so long, it was looking rather interesting.

Nice chapter. The final scene tough...kh...pff-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! Oh man, it was...HILARIOUS! I beg you man, please continue this, its AWESOME

-DO NOT READ BELLOW UNLESS YOU WANT TO GET CURSED.
This is a true story. A girl died in 1933. A man buried her when she was still alive. The murder chanted, "Toma Sota balcu," as he buried her. Now that you have read this chant, you will meet this little girl. In the middle of the night she will be on your ceiling. She will suffocate you like she was suffocated. If you post this on your profile, she will not bother you. Your kindness will be rewarded. Lucillia

I have really enjoyed this chapter but will the introduction of this new Element change the story but at least he will be happy right now.

The thing you said about Naruto is right he wouldn't be pushed around so easily by a girl like this because of his upbringing he was trained to be a soldier.

hey this story is awesome...will any girls from the naruto universe be in the harem?
also...how come u havent updated it in like 2 years...plz update soon man