omg this is such an awesome story! i totaly love it. i mean i am so happy to finally see a story about auron with no pairings and no romance. wow i love the whole idea of this in general, please update soon!

OMG! This is one of the coolest FFX story I've read! This is so great! I wish SquareEnix would make a movie or a game about Auron's life and pilgrimage together with Jeckt and Braska! That would have been so awesome! :D

Great story! I can't wait till you update again! I hope there will be MANY MANY chapters left of this story! Great work on this! :D

Interesting premise... good work! Definitely different from lots of Auron stories out there.

And haha yes I did read the whole thing (in regards to your A/N about 2 people reading it). Only I just found it yesterday in my defense. I'm not actually mean enough to read a whole fic and not review it. Well, most of the time. ;)

nice!

How old was Yuna in that Chapter?

I feel for Braska... and Yuna...

I felt for Auron eariler so he doesn't get 'the special' treatment!

Looking forward to the next update!

I really like this! You keep Auron in character very well and it just makes the story flow, you know? Anyway, keep up the good work and I can't wait until Chapter 18!

WHee!

I love it when Stories are dedicated to me... or when my name is mentioned!

hehehehehehehe

ok... I liked this chapter.. mainly because it clears things up for the readers

about Auron... if he actually has a heart or not...

(in this story.. obviously, he does)

It's good to know, that Auron wants to marry for love, not for business!

if you know what I mean!

What I'm saying is that... He's not totally devoid of emotion

(like some authors make him)

and Thank you for updating! very berry much appreciated!

and if you excuse me... I might read Auron Falls again

(whilst you finish this one)

yay! I so love this story. it's so sweet... lol, kinda bittersweet. great writing, it's fun to read, not tedious.

oh! I love this Story! It's one of the best Pre-FFX auron stories I've ever read.

This last chapter was adorable! Little Yuna is so cute!

great job I'll be watching and waiting for your update! thanks!

Okay, yo! You'sa get's another reviewer!

This is, I think, one of the best Auron's Life stories I've read! (And believe me when I say I read a LOT of fanfiction .

ouch... and to think I was looking forward to reading more!

Well GR!

Nah! Jks! jks! I'm just grateful that you wrote this chapter... since your busy and all that!

I don't get it it either? (but don't tell me! I want to read it in the story for myself! or even work it out!) what's with the rock?

Hey! still loving the story! yeah!

I can't remember if I asked this or not... but is this the first story... Then Braska's pilgrimage (are you gonna add that in this story?), then Yuna's story (and this one? or you gonna start a new one, or are you gonna leave it as a self explained story?) the Auron Falls, and then Children of Spira and Earth? is that the order?

I wonder... (i really don't know what I wonder... I just felt like saying it!)

Well Good Luck on your Moving!

(I don't know if you need it or not... but I just felt like saying that one too... to sort of show I care... I guess)

Sorry it took me so long to read your story!

I was kind of banned from the computer and I couldn't access the website at school!

I love ya story! Please keep going!

ARGH! where's the next chapter?

I like this one! oh I really like this one!

This story sort of fit into your other story's?

'Auron Falls' and 'Children of Earth and Spira'?

I want more! please update ASAP!

oh and update your other stories that I like too!

Personally, I'm thinking romance.

Love the details!

~SL

Nice beginning!

Make the chapters longer! This looks great, I want to see how Auron grows up.