You should probably put the no yaoi warning in the description. It is a romance fic with two male main characters, after all.

Aww this one is funnier then the rewrite

Aww shame you won't continue this one I kinda like better than the new one *sigh* well it had a great run while it lasted!

is there any way you will contiue this one as well

hey update the story man like what the hell hurry up with it

hey man update this story man it's been over 3 months since u updated this fic man like what the hell

Dude great job on writing another great story! This is an awesome crossover but I think you should just keep the girls to magic instead of also chakra. Anyway I totally think naruto and the ninja girl should go together! And maybe Eva to cuz she is a badass vamp. And y did you add love hina? That's just weird? Like will they integrate into the story?

love this story so far and cant wait 2 read more

hey come on and update there buddy i want 2 know what happens next because the excitement is killing me there buddy

lol, naruto/ love hina would make a good crossover actually... and a naru/motoko, or naru/kanako pairing. *cough* back on track. good story, some flaws in grammar, but easily overlooked. the plot and story itself is a joy to read and overall is well put together. you also seemed to have captured both author's individual styles. outstanding job.

hey when is the next chapter coming out? cause i want to know what happens next and NOW!

Pact 15?

IO0-e

Oh my god I did it again god this review was twice as logn as my first !

I wrote a long review but i accidentally, out of habit, pushed the review button and it all got deleted ;~;

That last part was great. There is somethign i absolutly hate about this. Why is naruto sharing his ninja studies with the girls? WHY WHY WHY! That totaly pissed me off! I really think that the girls don't deserve the knowledge that he has to train hard for to learn. I'm sorry but that really is a massive put off from the story.