I’ve read both and this was the sequel but unfinished it was writte some tie ago. Why is it the best fictions that don’t get completed. What happens between Mack and Helen- will Helen stay after their talk it was a little invthe air. Of curse Alex already loves Helen. What happens when the year is up.

You have eat us hanging and you’ve had so many hits on both fictions. It’s a shame you have just left it.

What can we do to get you to compete this? All I can say is please please come back for your readers. It would be cathartic for you to complete it I’m sure.

Again please come back to us I’m not to proud to beg.

Kudos from the U.K.

Mx

I'm sorry for your great lost.

That is horrible to hear. Condolences and I wish you well. Take care.

Ugh! You're killing us! Another GREAT story dearly developed to its meaty middle then just left...hanging. Alex would give you those big eyes and his pouty look. As Helen is finding out, it's very true that different aspects of your personality can emerge depending on who you are with. I really like the interaction/playful nature between Mack and Helena. Would like to see more Olivia/Mack bonding. But most of all just CONTINUE please!

Ugh! You're killing us! Another GREAT story dearly developed to its meaty middle then just left...hanging. Alex would give you those big eyes and his pout look. As Helen is finding out, it's very true that different aspects of your personality can emerge depending on who you are with. I really like the interaction/playful nature between Back and Helena. Would like to see more Olivia

Thank you for a great story. More please.

Just read this gerat story. I hope you update soon

I was so happy to see an update on this story. I really want Helen and Mack to work out, Helen though needs to tell Mack about Nikki and Mack needs to confide in Helen about the case more. I hope you'll continue with this story, I don't usually like Helen paired up with anyone other than Nikki but this is a really great story and needs to be completed pleeeeeeeeeeeeease :)

YOWZA!It was worth the wait.

Hey i really do hope you continue this story. its amazing!

Please post more.

Loved the bit about 'do you happen to know west yorkshire area code?' lol. Just to let you know there isnt just one. lol.

Please write more soon xx

That,that was so beautiful!

Excellent update...thank you.

Olivia's going to be in trouble!

SCORE!That was an awesome chapter!

Congratulations on the new nephew. Thank you for the updates I'm really enjoying this story, like I said before I didn't think I could picture Helen with anyone other than Nikki but reading this it's almost as if Nikki set all this up before she died. I'm loving the interaction between Mack, Helen and Alex. I hope that this will evetually have a happy ending because all three deserve it.