Yes, indeed. Thank you Krory. *smiles*

ergo Allen was just stark raving bonkers is like my favorite line in the whole story. I appreciate ur excellent Grammer, I loved the plot and the characters fit well. I found this story years ago but I reread it and it's sequels a lot because it's an amazing piece of literature. thank you for writing this!

This is a beautifully written piece of work! I love the details and the plot line, and the portrayal of the characters! Not for a single moment did the characters go OOC! The grammar is excellent as well. I loved the story!

Awesome fic!

Wow, just wow! Nice writing style. Too detailed and I love it!

For a one-shot, it's pretty good.

This was really well written. I don't usually read one-shots because they usually end up with such little potential that I get bored, but this was a really good one.

Kanbai!

i very much liked your fic.

Well. I'm not really into this pairing, but since I finally decided to read a fic of yours:

My compliments. You say this was your first, right? Well, it has less detail than your later ones, but it really is good. My favorite part: you keep the characters fairly IC. Really, I can't even poke at any obvious style mistakes or anything. Shweet.

Oh yeah:

"A beansprout is a beansprout, maximum synchronization or not."

Best. Line. Ever. xD

That's so cute, but so sad!

hurray for yaoi

Very nice story. I might want to check the squals.

*Thumbs up* I like! The pairing, the reactions of the others, Bookman's warnings, the style and flow of the writing, really good!

Are you continuing this? It feels...unfinished...

Briliant writing and dialogue! (i love the lav/allen pairing)

As a LxA writer, do you know any good sites to read it? I can only seem to find ONE!

Wow I really love this fanfic! I can't find many decent, non-hentai fanfics of this couple but it is my favorite couple! I love you! _

loved it! please update soon i love laviallen so much and your fic is great so far :D