Reviews for Our Story
Stampiej chapter 33 . 5/22/2013
Loved it! First I was disappointed at the 'we decided no kids for us' and then they have two!
BreeVanDeKamp11 chapter 27 . 5/31/2010
omg. i laughed so hard at coopers ooh look! at something shiny:) great story read it all in one day! well so far...
Jas chapter 33 . 3/8/2009
I've read this story last year, and I must say I love it very very very much (and believe me I've read it a number of times over and over again). I just didn't come to notice that there are a few more chapters updated until recently (which is such a good news to me).

The last few chapters really turn the story into another peak. Previously in the story the post-accident Mark used to just listen and seemed to accept everything Erica told her. But then these few chapters showed that he's actually not comfortable with everything happened over the last few years. For Mark I can understand why he freaked out in the first place after finding such loads of changes, as he only remembered that he's the man-whore and nothing more. Anyway I think the plot is interesting and realistic. Also, I love the Erica that you portrait, I can see the soft side of her, especially when she interacted with her daughters. It's also quite her character that she didn't show her weak side too much (such as really cry out in front of Mark) every time he said something disappointing. And I definitely love the two little girls in the story, so cute and adorable.

There's not much fanfic on Erica/Mark out there, not to even mention one that is longer than a few chapters. Yours is the longest one I've found and definitely my most favorite one. It's kind of sad that it really ends here yet I am so grateful that you wrote it. I hope someday you will find yourself free again and write more about it ;p

p.s. seems like I talk too much (although I really wanna talk a lot more about your story), once again, I really enjoy reading it :D
bears434 chapter 33 . 2/21/2009
I'm disappointed there won't be more, but I can understand why you chose to end it here. This was a fabulous story - I really enjoyed reading it the entire way :]
Post-it-fan chapter 33 . 2/15/2009
Yeah great ending!
j0k3 chapter 33 . 2/14/2009
LOVE IT

I too love Erica/Mark and would love too read more of that pairing, if not from you, then from others XD
Kristen chapter 33 . 2/14/2009
I loved it! I'm so sad that it's over though. I love the Erica/Mark pairing. Anyone know where there are more stories with this pairing? I would love to read them. But anyway, I loved the whole story. It was wonderfully written.
buggeroff chapter 33 . 2/14/2009
no!

massive protest! i dont want it to end here!

please at least say ur considering a sequal!
raelenie chapter 33 . 2/14/2009
well, i msut say at the beginning of the fic i really really really disliked mark...which is a VERY hard thing for me to do

'cause he's just the most adorable thing EVER

but moving on

i'm so glad he came back and his memory is kinda/sorta coming back

it was a lovely ending btw

i loved grace's line

Grace walked over to Mark, and he scooped her up in a hug as well, “Don’t leave us again daddy. You made mommy cry.” She whispered into his ear.

that made me want to cry as well

lol

congrats on finshing the fic...it's kinda sad that it's over

it was one out of the three mark and erica fics on thsi board

and i love mark and erica but that ship seems to have disappeared especially with erica leaving the hsow and all

*sigh*

but wonderful story! can't wait until you write something else.
Lime-Lover chapter 33 . 2/13/2009
I loved this story! Awesome ending. Thank you for sharing this. :D
lilxjames chapter 33 . 2/13/2009
aw that was really, really sweet! loved the ending!

i read the last 3 chapters today and they are great! good job and congrats on finishing your story ]
Lime-Lover chapter 32 . 2/9/2009
I really love this! It is beyond awesome! I don't know how to end it, maybe all Mark needs is a good ol' bitch-slapping! :D
Kristen chapter 32 . 2/8/2009
I loved this chapter and am so glad that you updated! Poor Erica. I feel so bad for her. She was my favorite character on the show and there just aren't enough stoires about her out there. I would love to read more about Erica's pregnancy with Abbi, but however you want to continue, please do. I love the Erica/Mark pairing. It's so cute. I loved her with Callie, but Mark would have been fun, too. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Guest chapter 32 . 2/8/2009
I loved this chapter and am so glad that you updated! I feel so sorry for Erica. I loved her on the show and there just aren't enough stories about her around. I agree that Mark needs to get his memory back,slowly should be the way. I'm a little sad we won't read about Erica's pregnancy with Abbi, but however you want to continue the story is great with me. Just as long as you do continue. I love the Erica/Mark pairing. They're so cute together. I loved her with Callie but I think that Mark would have been fun, too.
edith418 chapter 32 . 2/8/2009
I agree with all of the comments so far...somehow ending with Mark remembering their life together...maybe the smell of Erica on her pillow or something small like how their things are together in their bathroom that sets off a trigger of all the memories...or maybe a video from when Abbi was just born showcasing the family...just as long as our family gets patched back up and Erica gets her man back! :-)
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