Very sweet story. All the children's character are well written, and the adventure being made into a children's play are amazing.

This story is hereby listed among my most favorite to read when i need a cheer-me-up.

Nice work !

Awwwww this is so sweet & funny & cute & heartwarming & I LOVE IT
FF XII needed a fic like this! :)

I kinda damned myself, ruined the story fpr myself. Woe to me. Was a good story, but wished it had a spoiler alert. Heck, I would've read it anyway. *applause*

It's been a while since I read something this funny, and I actually found myself reading the lines aloud! Brilliant job. I wish I could put on a play like this someday. -

I really liked to read this OS. That was funny to see their reactions in those circumstances.

Pfft, bahahaha!

That was so cute! I love the little children, especially the bunnies. LOL. I can see Fran's expression!

Ah! Cutte!

Man, i'm going on a spree on reading your Basch/Ashe fics.

:D Yays.

Heehee, I laughed soo hard during the whole thing. I love the scene when Fran says “She is not Viera…” Ashe heard Fran mutter to Balthier. “Those ears are not accurate.” I can really imagine Fran saying that!

Captain Arse-a-larse! HAHA! I love this story, it is so funny, and endearing.

The ending was brilliant as well...O, Ashe's secret is out now!

Lizzie

I just read this for the first time. :D

I am dying here already I love this idea... reading as I review. Delightful!

Oh geez... the blond boy playing Basch...Gah!

"Captains Vossler Arse-a-larse…"

LMAO!

“Oi! Vossler!” I am laughing my ass off... “Jaden…don’t say oi again.”

"It left Basch and a very small frightened boy with a wig on" ok I seriously can't get through this without stopping to laugh at every line...

aw now it gets somewhat sad. I see how Basch would find it hard to laugh.

“She is not Viera…” Ashe heard Fran mutter to Balthier. “Those ears are not accurate.”

:D Hahahha

"Dari took acting a little too seriously. The slap on Jaden’s face was a smite too hard.

“OW!” The little boy screamed." OMG this is too good.

Hahahah! and little Basch pushed her down!

...there was a very large red mark on his face along with some snot and tears... I can't take it... omg LMAO.

I love this story and you!

~Famke~

OHOHO! I really love these light-hearted fics of yours... they make me SQUEAL! hahaha. the kids are so cute. It would've been cuter if they were their real kids. wahahaha.

I super duper love this! you should write more happy fics! more power!

Ok... reading this at work again shouldn't be encouraged. I have to clamp my mouth a few times to avoid laughing out loud XD

I find this to be endearingly funny and touching BD I love how you've transformed that serious original story into an adorable chilren play ;) There's too much cute moments for me to start listing out, but the scene that I liked was how little Jaden pushed Dari in retaliation ;D Basch would never harm his darling queen, which is why this scene is more hilarious than ever.

Also, the scene that little Coren and Jaden shared and that funny paper mache helm :)

I also liked how you described each and everyone of those children, and their different personalities and whether if it's suited or completely disastrous.

And of course, the final last glimpse that Ashe gave to her captain was a nice touch in the ending. It wouldn't qualify as a Baschashe fic if there isn't a special moment for them, right? ;)

Haha, that was great! I think I would have busted out laughing if I was there for that. That play had to be priceless. Oh, and the ending when the two boys were fighting over who Ashe really liked... haha. Kids... they say the funniest things and make for the greatest moments! Good thing I don't have any yet...

ANOTHER great story! I loved it!

~*~ landis icelilly ~*~

Wow! That was too adorable for words. I wanted to adopt each and every one of those children for myself. I especially liked how Fran took the whole bit. Her reaction was hilarious. I certainly liked how the children took such a complex storyline and put it in terms of themselves; and how the party (I'm so used to referring to them that way) took it. This is the new generation of Ivalice indeed! The ending was brilliant. Balthier's line couldn't have been better (you have some excellent dialoge going on through the entire story), and I liked how Basch didn't show any emotion until the end. Ashe handled the situation perfectly. Overall, I loved it!

... : That was so damn cute. XD

Arse-a-larse! LOL!