Haha this funny! I get the feeling reading this that you have some experience with small kids, the limp noodle thing was dead on! Can't wait for chapter 2!

I don't know who to feel sorry for...Allen, or the people who have to deal with him atm xP

If Allen hear that Lavi said Allen is " a hyper demon spawn " he will definitely sad

Wow.. this is a good intro... it seems like Lavi will have a hard time after this
Aww... .. Allen as a toddler i can imagine that

how do you take 5 years to rewrite a story?
That is shitload. (0-0)

Okay. Not sure how many of you will see this, but I just want to say I'm soooo sorry! For the last few years internet access has not been much of a thing I've had... But I am writing. I just moved to a new town and am hunting for a cafe with WiFi so I can repost this story. My phone will only allow me to post a review and not a story.

Okay...so its been 4 years...and I rly rly wanna read this story. If you ever do start this again (sorry, but I'm kinda doubting it), remember that little Allen has a street British accent like "What are you doing to him?" vs "Whaddya doin' ta 'im?" and he's also super snarky.

Seems interesting. I would love to read this story, so could you update soon?

YAY.. I can't wait..

I just looveee the personality Allen had before he was with Mana.. XD

adorable story...can't wait for you to continue

loved it

Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!

Gaarin: -

Mizuhara: Shut. The fuck. Up.

Gaarin: ITS SO INCREDIBLY KAWAIIY PERFECT! Amazing, Void-chan-sensei! I love it!

Mizuhara: ... Are you high off any illegal drugs?

Gaarin: Is Yullen Fluff illegal?

Mizuhara: ...

Gaarin: IT SHOULD BE! (Hey, kid. Want to buy some yullen fluff?)

Mizuhara: ... Yup, you're high.

Mou, you need to finish this and update it!

AWE CUTE! BUT IS THIS THE LAST CHAPTER CUZ IT SEEMS UNFINISHED SOMEHOW...