Ok first thing first u killed tony of all people! the story's good but did u have to kill him off a little after the jibbs and tiva at the end of one chapter?

the ending was great. loved it but I still think tony shouldn't have died.

I can't bleive t\you did that. Tony is my favorite character and I think I'm gonna cry now thanks.

that was stupid and you should profread

how come Ziva calls Gibbs jethro? I thought only Ducky and Jen could.

amazing job Terry you made both your parents proud and happy and Ziva and colin as well

a sequal would be great more of the whole family (team included and Colin and Samual)(sp)

It is looking like Terry is now the reciepitant of the headslaps Tony would be proud!

Amazing work

oh no, it is the last chapter!

wonderful story Terri, I do hope you write the sequel, I want to see a wedding, hehehehe.

Gibbs and Jenny together, always makes me smile, loved it!

that was wonderful! well done indeed!

ohh dear! wonderful scene with Jen, she know how to deal with her tough as nails son.

love it! update soon!

excellent chapter! I hope he does come back, I hope his father is happy to see him. Update soon!

Jemmy is right if not for himself then for the others and his father

he did what he needed to do and i have a feeling that his comrades would not want him beating himself up about it

keep up the amazing work

Oh no Terry's a murderer now... what's Gibbs and the Director gonna do since he's their son?

Gibbs is going to flip when he finds him.

Excellent chapter!

I am sorry to tell you this, but I live in Mexico City and there is not a drop of water for miles around, its in the center of the country, so I am afraid no boat can sail from the largest city in the wrold hun, you can place him in Acapulco or Puerto Vallarta.

if you bring Tim to Mexico, can I keep him?

update soon!

Terry I understand what you did and why you did it but your family is worried about you your father is indeed on his way and your mother is worried as well stay safe Ziva and the kids need you