Reviews for The Ninja Club
bmidd111 chapter 1 . 3/3/2018
You should continue this in another story, only this time, have the other Jinchuriki and their Biju join the Ninja Club. And you do know they're not demons right? they're masses of Chakra with consciousness.
ryuseigai chapter 24 . 2/3/2016
This story was very well thought-out and very intriguing. I wish we were able to see Gaara get closer to his siblings and what happened to Kakashi in the end. Thanks for the excellent story!
Guest chapter 24 . 11/4/2015
That story was amazing! The whole reincarnation from the original time period with the flashbacks. Completely different from any story I've read on FF. Definitely the most creative and original. Loved it!
lampshadezz chapter 24 . 4/15/2015
to be truthful, i'd never even thought about how utterlyADORABLE this pairing could be. i once came across it on a fic centred around Naruto and Sasuke (God, It Burns by Mako75... i think?). i realise this is being utterly dramatic, but i'm am SO glad that this was my first PROPER one of these two. i'm making such a big deal of this, aren't i?

i can't even begin to explain my love for this story. the plot was so well-thought-out, with no loop-holes what-so-ever (except about what happened to Kakashi. it's irritating me now, just itching at the edges of my mind...) i love how it wasn't a mutual love-at-first-sight. how neji thought gaara was a complete, utter weirdo before he was given some solid proof. it's always more interesting when a couple starts off hating, or more mildly, disliking or having something less than a good impression of their destined, star-crossed lover.

the theories of after-life that you included in here left lots to contemplate about, and i like things that make me think! :) keeps me occupied.

that sort-of never-ending cycle of their life was also a prominent aspect of your story. it made things all the more interesting, huh? :D that is, of course, unless this last life you included in this turns out to be their 'perfect' life. that way, they can live happily ever after! :3

i'm not even going to bother going into how much i loved your portrayal of this story's characters. i loved them, is all i will say.

i think it's about time i went through what other stories you may have written, ne? XD
Icy Doodles chapter 2 . 1/2/2015
This is only the second chapter and I already love your story. It can be tough to draw me in so quickly, well done.

I adore the relationship between Naruto and his demon. It is interesting how differently Naruto and Gaara have learned to coexist with their demons. I wonder if Gaara will ever find a common ground with his own.
Neko Chibi Naru chapter 24 . 9/20/2014
Awwww i loved this story! It was so cute! *-*
on the backs of angels chapter 24 . 8/1/2014
okay hi so ive really never thought about this pairing i guess and really i was only digging around for slice-of-life sand sibling fics but this is just an insanely beautiful story. i really enjoy the way you built this world, and the way you incorporated characters into it. the whole reincarnation idea is ingenius, and the epilogue is incredible. i love the way you used kankuro and temari in the plot, and i loved your interpretation of sasuke, and of naruto. neji i felt was a little flat, but overall, i adored this fic, and wow. im still kinda speechless about it. again, the epilogue? its totally great. i love the dream recording thing. and the dejavu. and everything. wow.
Anon chapter 24 . 1/15/2014
So... Just thought I'd say it. This story is absolutely amazing. It was the first gaaraxneji story I ever read, and it's still good the second time around. It survived the test of time and is backed up by an amazing plot. Honestly, it was worth searching through all the naruto fanfiction to find this again. It really is a gem. Thank you for the good read.
sh chapter 24 . 1/5/2014
you're the best. love this!
Cyanide chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
"Kyuubi" is a counter for nine. The Nine-Tailed Fox's name is Kurama.

This is a god story, but it'd be GREAT if the names were all appropriate! :D
Captive Nightingale chapter 24 . 6/14/2013
I stayed up until some god awful hour of the morning in order to read this all in one sitting. It was truly amazing and I enjoyed every moment I spent captivated by the words on my screen.
thegreencarousel chapter 24 . 2/4/2013
That is the truest sign of insanity - insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy.

Nora Ephron

And to quote Gaara's art teacher to describe my feelings at the end of the fic:

Poignant.
rebecca chapter 24 . 1/15/2013
WOW.

"It is the nature of insanity to repeat the same actions, and expect to get different results."

So true. You are so wise, and so great, and such an awesome writer. I do not think I can learn the ways of your awesomeness, Obi-wan. I am a mere padawan.
rebecca chapter 2 . 1/15/2013
"Sometimes, he wished humans could be as easy as demons were."

FABULOUS!

So the strength of their seals carried over too..
Sae Ayameko chapter 24 . 12/25/2012
This was great. Oh my god, there is no words to describe how wonderful this story was. It was perfect! The kind of story that draws my attention. I love this. I would have appreciated a sequel; from a start where Orochimaru comes back, Sasuke finds out more about Itachi, and Sasuke and Naruto get together. Yet that can't really happy with this epilogue so I guess that's a No to a sequel huh? Anyhow bravo!
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