Keep writing

Keep up the good writing

I like the story so far keep it up!

what the fack is wrong with her dad Like that's ur daughter u hobag! :(

good background story I like those two wolves :)

cool Link can talk to animals haven't heard of that one before! I like it!

I am by no means someone that should give advice on writing, in fact I'm probably the last person anyone should take advice from, but to me SOMETIMES the language seems to be passive and not active. However, as the story is progressing it looks like your getting better so just something to keep in mind. Sorry if someone has said the same thing, I am way too lazzy to look at the reviews. In general, you have an original plot line that I hope to see go further.

Also if you could put a reference to the Zelda game "the faces of evil", that would be lovely.

We shall wait patiently for the next update.

Yay an update!

I feel like this time around you were a lot more aware of exactly what you wanted to do, plotwise :) Glad to see a partial reunion here ;)

Sorry but i did not see any Lemon Scene. Only Implied Sex. Add a Lemon Scene please

I didn't actually get a chance to review this the other day when I read it, since I was falling asleep on my keyboard (it was 6am). I love the plot you've got going on, but you really, really need to do some editing before posting these. FFN itself has a very good editor, which I would even argue is better than MS Word or an equivalent. I've noticed a lot of issues with spelling and grammar.

I've also noticed several continuity issues, such as when Midna says she and Link were cursed by the same person, but then when Impa is talking like he was born that way, no one bothers to correct her, implying it's true. Impa's whole speech didn't make a lot of sense to begin with, honestly...

Another one was Ilia; At one point early on you mentioned that Link had a childhood friend named Ilia who was killed in the massacre; If that were true, I find it hard to believe he wouldn't even show some sort of recognition to the Ordon girl's name. I have a feeling you forgot about that, lol.

Do the king destroyed Link's kingdom. I know link want revenge. the king is too Evil

Hi! First of all let me congratulate you for your story. I hope you continue and the same time I had a request: Can you, in next chapters, explain better the "curse" and why Impa said that about Link? Honestly it created me more doubts than explains the story, at less that's your intention. Well good bye (and sorry for my bad english!)

Feel bad for the Wolves. Link will be piseed. Link should sense them. Animals are highly attuned with Nature and their Six Sense