This is it?

nice.. UPDATE!

good story i cant wait to see what happens next keep updating

ooh intresting

Heya,

To change things up (in my life, mainly, not yours...though maybe this'll make a change for you, too, I dunno), this is going to be a review of your summary, and not the actual story. After all, a well-written summary is what makes readers decide whether or not to start reading...

"Tifa has been missing ever since last year. During that time a new Organization risen up, has this new organization have a certain tie with Tifa's disappearance? CloTi, no FLAMES k. Post AC and DOC"

The first sentence is fine. The second, however, is a run-on, and has at least one fairly major grammar error. To fix the run-on, split it into two sentences, and to get rid of the main grammar error, change 'has' to 'does':

"Tifa has been missing ever since last year. During that time a new Organization risen up. Does this new organization have a certain tie with Tifa's disappearance? CloTi, no FLAMES k. Post AC and DOC"

Also, consistency is nice, but redundancy is bad. In the area of increasing consistency, please either always capitalize 'organization', or always don't capitalize it (I would recommend not capitalizing it, as it doesn't seem to be a proper name). In the area of eliminating redundancy, find a different descriptor than 'new' to put in front of 'organization' (or...just take away the second 'new'. Wordiness is bad, too, although me saying that invokes the pot-kettle argument). Alternatively, you could also find a different word for organization. ("Does this new group...")

Further in the area of redundancy (well...this isn't quite redundancy, but it does fit), if this organization has -any- tie to Tifa's disappearance, then it's important, neh? It doesn't need to be one specific tie (which is what you're implying when you say 'certain tie'). I would recommend taking out the 'certain'. I'd also recommend changing 'with' into 'to', as generally things are tied 'to' each other, not 'with' each other. (There are exceptions, but methinks that 'to' makes it read easier).

Finally, to make it look a bit more professional, you may want to take out the 'k' at the end of "CloTi, no FLAMES k." (Possibly, take out the 'no FLAMES' as well, or change the 'k' to a 'please', because everyone likes polite people, heh.) Also, you should probably put a period after "Post AC and DOC".

...so, yeah. That would be my two cents.

Cheerio!

interesting start so far. Id like to see where this goes.

An original plot I don't think I've seen anyone do something like this before. MIA Tifa and raising secret organization does seem to have potential...maybe I'll steal your plot, ya? ;P Kidding. Seriously, you have a plot with potential.

However, the story is a bit predictable. I can guess at who Number 49 is going to be. *couch*Tifa*cough* Tone down the hints, they are too obivous, throw in something that would keep the readers having suspicions but not be aboslutely sure of their guess. It's somewhat hard to judge if you're being too obvious or too vague. I think this is something you learn with experience. You did made a good attempt at that.

The characters are a little bit OOC for example, Vincent would not shove Barret even though Vince is a terrible public speaker. The scene with Yuffie and Shelke would be funny if it wasn't for the situation. This is a meeting about their missing friend and they are ignoring and unresponsive to the news. The OOCs are evil and tend to creep into any writers fanfic just need to keep an eye out for them.

There are somethings that seems like they are suddenly thrust onto the scene without much explaination leaving the reader feeling confused and the story disjointed. Nanaki's expedition into Infinite headquarters, the whole C/O thing (that could just be me), why some General is destorying the world, sudden reunion of AVALANCHE minus Cid and Cait Sith. You just need to expand on those parts explaining them a bit more. Though you might be explaining those bits in the next other chapters just something to keep in mind.

It's good that you got straight into the action right from the start. You didn't beat around the bush or drag the story into long unnecessary actions that doesn't contribute to the overall plot.

Your story has potential to knock the socks off many readers. Don't take my comments as something to discourage you from continuing. The reason I wrote this review is because I want to see this story knock my socks off. I want to see the next chapter up soon. Can't wait to see what's next.

-You will always improve if you continue and will only go nowhere is you stop.

It's about time you updated... I waited so long! YOU NEED TO MAKE LONGER CHAPTERS!

It's cute man! Continue please! :]